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Email to David Grassie at Smith's T-shirts. Describe exactly what you would like to order and ask if it is possible to do what you wish.

Email to David Grassie at Smith's T-shirts. Describe exactly what you would like to order and ask if it is possible to do what you wish. QKjMP
Dear David. I am writing this letter to enquire about designs of T-shirts which are advertised on the advertisement board in the entrance of the Sports school, as well as I want to be fully aware of the drawings, if it is possible to order the picture of a lion on surfboard on the front. It's a great chance for me to get the T-shirts with preferable pattern and I am hesitating it would be ok if the clothes were washed. Also, I wonder weather there is extra discount if I order twenty plus of them. I would prefer 21 medium sized T-shirts with drawings on their front if possible. Yours sincerely Client from Jizakh.
Dear David. I am writing this letter to
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
about designs of T-shirts which
are advertised
on the advertisement board in the entrance of the Sports school,
as well
as I want to be
fully
aware of the drawings, if it is possible to order the picture of a lion on surfboard on the front. It's a great chance for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the T-shirts with preferable
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
pattern and
I am hesitating it would be ok if the clothes
were washed
.
Also
, I wonder
Did you mean "whether"?
weather
there is extra discount if I order twenty plus of them. I would prefer 21
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
medium sized
T-shirts with drawings on their front if possible. Yours
sincerely
Client from
Possible spelling mistake found.
Jizakh
.
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IELTS letter Email to David Grassie at Smith's T-shirts. Describe exactly what you would like to order and ask if it is possible to do what you wish.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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