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Write a letter to a hotel manager in another city to ask about a 2 day business trip for yourself and your colleagues. Include An introduction to your office Information about the business trip Other requests

Write a letter to a hotel manager in another city to ask about a 2 day business trip for yourself and your colleagues. Include An introduction to your office Information about the business trip Other requests YLNLr
Hello Sir/Ma’am, Greetings, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this to enquire about the availability and prices for 2 days business trip including 3 suite rooms and a meeting room from June 15th – 17th 2021. I am Sales Operation manager at RLH Corporation, Burlington and we deal in consumer durable electronic all over Canada. We are having the sales presentation with one of our very prestigious client in Toronto. We are looking from a good conference room for around 15 guests and accommodation for 2, me and two of my colleagues. Along with the accommodation and banquet rental prices, I am planning to host a small dinner for around 15 people on June 15th, 2021. I would really appreciate if some from your food & Beverage department can contact me for the catering arrangements. They can contact me on +1 647 … …. 1, it is my business number and I am available between Monday to Friday 10 am to 4 pm. I look forwards to hearing from you soon. Regards Rishi Saxena
Hello Sir/Ma’am,

Greetings, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this to
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enquire
about the availability and prices for 2 days business trip including 3 suite rooms and a meeting room from June 15th
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–
17th 2021.

I am Sales Operation manager at
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RLH
Corporation,
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Burlington and
we deal in consumer durable electronic all over Canada. We are having the sales presentation with one of our
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very
prestigious client in Toronto. We are looking from a
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good
conference room for around 15 guests and accommodation for 2, me and two of my colleagues.

Along with the accommodation and banquet rental prices, I am planning to host a
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small
dinner for around 15
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people
on June 15th, 2021. I would
really
appreciate if
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some
from your food & Beverage department can contact me for the catering arrangements. They can contact me on +1 647 … …. 1, it is my business
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
number and
I am available between Monday to Friday 10 am to 4 pm.

I look forwards to hearing from you
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soon
.

Regards

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Rishi
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Saxena
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a hotel manager in another city to ask about a 2 day business trip for yourself and your colleagues. Include An introduction to your office Information about the business trip Other requests

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7 paragraphs
177 words
5.5
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