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Trip to Spain letter. Exchange students.

Trip to Spain letter. Exchange students. RwjeM
Dear friends in Spain, My name is Filip I am 14 years old and live in Bollebygd in a red house. I have one litle bother his name is Simon and one older sister her name is Jasmine my moms name is Pernilla and my dads is Stefan. My hobbys is football bandy golf and sailing. In the furture I want to be a profasionall football player or truck driver. When all of you comeing to Sweden I really think you all should test Swedish meatballs. We also have animalpark in Borås that are about twenty minutes from Bollebygd there you can look on animals and have a nice day there. I think all of you would like the animalpark beacause you can see some really nice animals like monkeys pinguins mooses wolves and more. In Gothenburg we also have a place called Liseberg there you can ride roller-costers and spinning weels and just enjoy the place. I think thats a good place to visit beacause they have some events when it's winter for exemple they have a winter land and on Easters day they have a Easter land. But when you all coming it's probably just a fun and nice place to visit. But ofcoures go out in the Swedish nature and feel how nice air it is. Go for a walk and have fun. I really think they would like that because it's so beautiful nature in Sweden and we have so we call it in Sweden, allemansrätten, that means that you are allowed to go on other peoples own areas, if you don't make up fire and burn up everything thats not allowed. But enough about Sweden, i don't know much about Spain but i know that they have a succesful national football team. So you see I don't know so much about Spain so i would like to hear more about what you can do in Spain and what food they how the nature is in Spain and what rules it is in the nature, how are they live, what sports are popular in Spain. I think it's good for us to do this things to lern about how it is in different countrys are around the world. You can for exemple learn about the weather the nature and the diferent way peoples are. I really looking forward to have all of you here in Sweden and I hope I could help and make it easyer to plan the trip have a nice day.
Dear friends in Spain,

My
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is
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Filip
I am 14 years
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and
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live
in
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Bollebygd
in a red
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house
. I have one
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litle
bother his
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is Simon and one older sister her
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is Jasmine my moms
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is
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Pernilla
and my dads is Stefan. My
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hobbys
is football bandy golf and sailing. In the
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furture
I want to be a
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profasionall
football player or truck driver.

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When
all of you
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comeing
to Sweden I
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really
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think
you all should
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test
Swedish meatballs. We
also
have
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animalpark
in
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Borås
that are about twenty minutes from
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Bollebygd
there you can look on animals and have a nice day there. I
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think
all of you would like the
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animalpark
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beacause
you can
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see
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some
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really
nice animals like monkeys
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pinguins
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mooses
wolves and more. In
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also
have a
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place
called
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Liseberg
there you can ride
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roller-costers
and spinning
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weels
and
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just
enjoy the
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place
. I
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think
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thats
a
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good
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place
to visit
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beacause
they have
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some
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events
when
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it's
winter for
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exemple
they have a winter land and on
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Easters
day they have
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a
Easter land.
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But
when you all coming
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it's
probably
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just
a fun and nice
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place
to visit.
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But
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ofcoures
go out in the Swedish
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nature
and feel how nice air it is. Go for a walk and have fun. I
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really
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think
they would like that
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because
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it's
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so
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beautiful
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nature
in
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Sweden and
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we call it in Sweden,
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, that means that you are
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allowed
to go on other peoples
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own
areas, if you don't
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make
up fire and burn up everything
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thats
not
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allowed
.

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enough
about Sweden,
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i
don't know much about Spain
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know that they have a
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succesful
national football team.
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you
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see
I don't know
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much about Spain
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so
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i
would like to hear more about what you can do in Spain and what food they how the
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nature
is in Spain and what
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rules
it is in the
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nature
, how are they
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, what sports are popular in Spain.

I
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good
for us to do
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this
things to
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lern
about how it is in
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different
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countrys
are around the world. You can for
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exemple
learn about the weather the
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nature
and the
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diferent
way peoples are. I
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really
looking forward
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to have
all of you here in Sweden and I hope I could
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help
and
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make
it
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easyer
to plan the trip have a nice day.
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IELTS letter Trip to Spain letter. Exchange students.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
418 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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