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Talking about my school

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Hi guys, this is the second day that I have written in my journal. Because yesterday, I wrote about introducing my diary. I do not need to mention that. Today I will talk about my school, or the university where I am studying. Well, I am currently a pupil at a university studying economics in HCM City, which is one of the top universities in town. I have been studying at this school for 2 years and I major in auditing here. I feel very proud of myself when I am a member here. It's not only a famous university but also a traditional university because it was established in 1947. And of course, there are a lot of things I am really into here. The first thing is the teachers here. They are very accommodating. I mean, they are willing to extend the deadline on assginments if students have problems or trouble doing that. Another thing is that they are also approachable. They always smile or say hello to you when they suddenly see you on campus. The next thing, I think, is the environment of study because the classmates are very friendly. I mean, they're good-natured and always ready to lend a hand to me when I have difficulties in my studies. Nevertheless, I dislike my school for some things. For example, my campus is very tiny, not as spacious as I had expected before. There is no sports complex. I feel disappointed about that because I'm a big fan of sports.
Hi guys, this is the second day that I have written in my journal.
Because
yesterday, I wrote about introducing my diary. I do not need to mention that.
Today
I will talk about my school, or the
university
where I am studying. Well, I am
currently
a pupil at a
university
studying economics in
HCM
City, which is one of the top
universities
in town. I have been studying at this school for 2 years and I major in auditing here. I feel
very
proud of myself when I am a member here. It's not
only
a
famous
university
but
also
a traditional
university
because
it
was established
in 1947. And
of course
, there are
a lot of
things I am
really
into here. The
first
thing is the teachers here. They are
very
accommodating. I mean, they are willing to extend the deadline on
assginments
if students have problems or trouble doing that. Another thing is that they are
also
approachable. They always smile or say hello to you when they
suddenly
see
you on campus. The
next
thing, I
think
, is the environment of study
because
the classmates are
very
friendly. I mean, they're
good
-natured and always ready to lend a hand to me when I have difficulties in my studies.
Nevertheless
, I dislike my school for
some
things.
For example
, my campus is
very
tiny, not as spacious as I had
expected
before
.
There is no sports
complex. I feel disappointed about that
because
I'm a
big
fan of sports.
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IELTS letter Talking about my school

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  American English
1 paragraphs
254 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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