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Talking about my school

Talking about my school n1mBE

Hi guys, this is the second day that I have written in my journal. Because yesterday, I wrote about introducing my diary. I do not need to mention that. Today I will talk about my school, or the university where I am studying. Well, I am currently a pupil at a university studying economics in HCM City, which is one of the top universities in town. I have been studying at this school for 2 years and I major in auditing here. I feel very proud of myself when I am a member here. It's not only a famous university but also a traditional university because it was established in 1947. And of course, there are a lot of things I am really into here. The first thing is the teachers here. They are very accommodating. I mean, they are willing to extend the deadline on assginments if students have problems or trouble doing that. Another thing is that they are also approachable. They always smile or say hello to you when they suddenly see you on campus. The next thing, I think, is the environment of study because the classmates are very friendly. I mean, they're good-natured and always ready to lend a hand to me when I have difficulties in my studies. Nevertheless, I dislike my school for some things. For example, my campus is very tiny, not as spacious as I had expected before. There is no sports complex. I feel disappointed about that because I'm a big fan of sports.

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