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Hi John and Laura, Hope you are doing well. I am just writing this letter to let you know that I have received the pictures you have sent. Firstly, I would like to thank you for the hospitality which you both have rendered during our stay in your home and adding to it, my taste bud still remembers the mouthwatering chicken fry which you prepared for us, while we return back from our vacation. I still remember the trip we went to Eiffel tower and while capturing a picture there, a bird took the hat off Laura, and I see the bird and its activity in the photos you have sent. Moreover, these photos are extremely special to me and it will always cherish those good memories. I am thankful to you for sharing this pic as well. Sorry that I could not write you a letter after reaching here. We had an issue with our water pipeline and the basement was fully flooded. Consequently, I had to find a plumber and fix it (which took a fortnight). Furthermore, I had a plethora of emails that were waiting for my reply as the backup person for me, had an emergency situation at his home and was away for the whole month. Next month, we have the fifth birthday of my daughter, so I would like to invite your family for this occassion. Also, please plan for an additional two weeks of staying, so that we can visit places around here. Take care and hope to hear from you back in the near future. Best Regards Ganesh
Hi John and Laura,

Hope you are doing well. I am
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writing this letter to
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let
you know that I have received the pictures you have
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sent
.

Firstly
, I would like to thank you for the hospitality which you both have rendered during our stay in your home and adding to it, my taste bud
still
remembers the mouthwatering chicken fry which you prepared for us, while we
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return back
from our vacation. I
still
remember the trip we went to
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Eiffel tower
and while capturing a picture there, a bird took the hat off Laura, and I
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see
the bird and its activity in the photos you have
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sent
.
Moreover
, these photos are
extremely
special to me and it will always cherish those
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good
memories. I am thankful to you for sharing this pic
as well
.

Sorry that I could not write you a letter after reaching here. We had an issue with our water pipeline and the basement was
fully
flooded.
Consequently
, I had to find a plumber and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
it (which took a fortnight).
Furthermore
, I had a plethora of emails that were waiting for my reply as the backup person for me, had an emergency situation at his home and was away for the whole month.

Next
month, we have the fifth birthday of my daughter,
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so
I would like to invite your family for this
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occassion
.
Also
,
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please
plan for an additional two weeks of staying,
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so
that we can visit places around here.

Take care and hope to hear from you back in the near future.

Best Regards

Ganesh
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265 words
6.0
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