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an Informal email for friend

an Informal email for friend nxqV2
Hi bestie How you doing? OMG I haven’t seen you in almost six months now, I mean beside video calls. I just really really miss you. It has been quite Difficult living in a strange city not knowing anybody, not knowing anywhere but hey! I’m trying to keep up. Tho I found Cafés and restaurants that I know you will love them. I am waiting for that day for you to come over and we can just hang around And explore the city, go shopping, try new foods…Man it would be the best day ever. Also it’s been a month since we last talked. God you wouldn’t think so much could happen in one month but I have stories to tell. First off I took some photography classes for the past three weeks. I never thought It would be this enjoyable. lately we’ve been working with some models and I feel like I am a legit fashion photographer. I’m still learning tho. But seeing all them models made me think about one thing and that’s that none of them could’ve never top you. your an absolute model naturally. maybe one day we can start working together, I mean I remember we used to talk about it as a joke but i can actually see it workout. Anyways I just want you to think about it and let me know what you think. I would probably be back for Christmas. I am planning to stay there for two weeks. we really should meet I just can’t tell you how much I have miss you. I remember you told me you met a guy, I want to know everything about it. Hey I know you heard about Jessica’s party and let me just tell you you’re the luckiest person for not showing up. I would explain it as a free trip to hell for one night with Jessica. The most boring yet the craziest person You ever met in your life throws a party and your brain tells you to show up. Well at least I learned that you never show up to someone’s party who just had a break up. I mean I do feel sad for her seriously I feel awful but oh my God it’s not like we did it. Why we should be the ones Tortured for it. Listen I feel like this is been a long essay I don’t wanna make you fall asleep so just give me a call if you had time, I want to hear your voice. I’ll be waiting then honey. Take care, lots of love Hannah
Hi bestie

Did you mean "How are you doing"?
How you doing
?

OMG I haven’t
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seen
you in almost six months
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now
, I mean beside video calls.

I
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just
really
really
miss you.

It has been quite Difficult living in a strange city not knowing anybody, not knowing anywhere
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but
hey! I’m trying to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
up. Tho I found Cafés and restaurants that I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
you will
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love
them. I am waiting for that day for you to
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come
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
over and
we can
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just
hang around And explore the city, go shopping, try new foods…
Add a space between sentences
Man
it would be the best day ever.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
it’s been a month since we last talked.

God you wouldn’t
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think
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so
much could happen in one month
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but
I have stories to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
.

First
off I took
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some
photography classes for the past three weeks.

I never
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thought
It would be this enjoyable.
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lately
we’ve been working with
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some
models and I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feel
like I am a legit fashion photographer. I’m
still
learning tho.
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But
seeing all them models made me
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think
about one thing and that’s that none of them could’ve never top you.
Did you mean "You're"?
your
an absolute model
naturally
.
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maybe
one day we can
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start
working together, I mean I remember we
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used
to talk about it as a joke
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but
Did you mean "I"?
i
can actually
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see
it workout. Anyways I
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just
want you to
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think
about it and
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let
me
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know
what you
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think
.

I would
probably
be back for Christmas. I am planning to stay there for two weeks.
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we
really
should
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meet
I
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just
can’t
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tell
you how much I have miss you. I remember you
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told
me you met a guy, I want to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
everything about it.

Hey I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
you heard about Jessica’s party and
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let
me
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just
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tell
Possible typo: you repeated a word
you you
’re the luckiest person for not showing up. I would
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explain
it as a free trip to hell for one night with Jessica.

The most boring
yet
the craziest person You ever met in your life throws a party and your brain
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tells
you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
up. Well at least I learned that you never
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show
up to someone’s party who
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just
had a break up. I mean I do
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feel
sad for her
seriously
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feel
awful
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but
oh my God it’s not like we did it. Why we should be the ones Tortured for it.

Listen I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feel
like this
is been
a long essay I don’t
The word 'wanna' is informal. Consider an alternative.
wanna
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you fall asleep
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
give me a call if you had time, I want to hear your voice.

I’ll be waiting then honey.

Take care, lots of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love


Hannah
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IELTS letter an Informal email for friend

Letter
  American English
16 paragraphs
433 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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