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REQUEST TO NEW Accommodation

REQUEST TO NEW Accommodation 1bBj7
Dear Sir or Madam, REQUEST TO NEW ACCOMADATION I am writing this letter is to inform you that, I found very unease time living in my room nowadays with my room buddy, I really disappointed about his behaviour recently and it caused me a lot of trouble. Actually he was throwing parties at few days of every week till late night. He has been inviting some friends over to parties at most of the time. If not, he uses some booze or stuffs and play loud music as a habitual action. I really cannot consider about my studies under these type of circumstance. It is impossible to concentrate on memorising lessons on my mind with this, I really frustrated about been relax to focusing on. with continuing these type of incidents every day will lead me to score less academic marks in my exams I am afraid though. I hope you would consider my request and do me a favour to keep everything in smooth. I wish if I could get a single occupancy room or swap with another room mate with effect on next semester begin. I hope to here from you soon, Thank you very much in advance, kind regards Lahiru Chanaka (Room 7 Oak wing)
Dear Sir or Madam, REQUEST TO NEW
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ACCOMADATION
I am writing this letter is to inform you that, I found
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very
unease time living in my
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room
nowadays with my
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room
buddy, I
really
disappointed about his
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behaviour
recently and it caused me
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a lot of
trouble. Actually he was throwing parties at few days of every week till late night. He has been inviting
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some
friends over to parties at most of the time. If not, he
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uses
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some
booze or stuffs and play loud music as a habitual action. I
really
cannot
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consider about my
studies under these type of circumstance. It is impossible to concentrate on
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memorising
lessons on my mind with this, I
really
frustrated about been
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relax
to focusing on. with continuing these type of incidents every day will lead me to score less academic marks in my exams I am afraid though. I hope you would consider my request and do me a
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favour
to
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keep
everything in smooth. I wish if I could
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get
a single occupancy
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room
or swap with another
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
room mate
with effect on
next
semester
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begin
.
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I
hope to
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here
from you
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soon
, Thank you
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very
much in advance, kind regards
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Lahiru
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Chanaka
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(Room
7 Oak wing)
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IELTS letter REQUEST TO NEW Accommodation

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
207 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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