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Today I’m glad for this opportunity to describe my house

Today I’m glad for this opportunity to describe my house WqwXk
Hi, teacher. I’m Hue. I come from Ninh Binh province, one of vietnam’s famous torist cities. Today I’m glad for this opportunity to describe my house. My house is in a safe area with nice neighbors. But it’s noisy because it’s on main road. I live with my family in a cosy house. When you go in you can find a hole on the right is the kithchen opposite the entrance door there is a living room and on the left there is a corridor to the bedroom and badroom. The kittchen is small but it’s ok for my family. there s a cooker opposite is a fridge and and a sink. In the middle of room, there is a dinner table. And all the necessary stuff for cooking is arranged carefully in the right corner of the room. Next to the kitchen, there is the living room. All room full of contrasting colours with decorations. There are some plants. It has comfy sofas with fluffy cushions. Opposites the sofas is a tv. After dinner, we will turn on the tv, choose a greats movie and watch it happily. Opposites my parent’s room is bathroom. There are two rooms upstairs, that my bedroom and my study. in my study, is has three bookcases and a lot of books. There is two desks and two personal computer on the desk. There are a printer. On the wall, there are a lot of picture family photos and photos with friends. The next room is my bedroom. There is a double bed, one for me and one for my elder sister, we share the bedroom. A wardrobe, a mirror and one bedside table, on it there is a small lamp. There is no pictures on the wall. It’s very simple. I love my house very much. If you like it, post your comment below and let me know what do you think about it. Thank you for listening.
Hi, teacher. I’m Hue. I
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come
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Ninh
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Binh
province, one of
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vietnam
’s
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famous
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torist
cities.
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Today
I’m glad for this opportunity to
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describe
my
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house
. My
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house
is in a safe area with nice neighbors.
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But
it’s noisy
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because
it’s on main road.

I
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live
with my family in a
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cosy
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house
. When you go in you can find a hole on the right is the
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kithchen
opposite the entrance door there is a living
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room
and on the
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left
there is a corridor to the
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bedroom
and
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badroom
.

The
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kittchen
is
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small
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but
it’s ok for my family.
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there
s a cooker opposite is a fridge
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and and
a sink. In the middle of
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room
, there is a dinner table. And all the necessary stuff for cooking
is arranged
carefully
in the right corner of the room.

Next
to the kitchen, there is the living
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room
. All
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room
full of contrasting
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colours
with decorations. There are
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some
plants. It has comfy sofas with fluffy cushions. Opposites the sofas is a
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tv
. After dinner, we will turn on the
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tv
, choose a greats movie and
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watch
it
happily
.

Opposites my parent’s
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room
is bathroom.

There are two
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rooms
upstairs, that my
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bedroom
and my study.
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in
my study, is has three bookcases and
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a lot of
books.
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There is two desks
and two personal
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computer
on the desk. There are a
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printer
. On the wall, there are
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a lot of picture
family photos and photos with friends. The
next
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room
is my
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bedroom
. There is a double bed, one for me and one for my elder sister, we share the
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bedroom
. A wardrobe, a mirror and one bedside table, on it there is a
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small
lamp.
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There is no pictures
on the wall. It’s
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very
simple.

I
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love
my
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house
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very
much. If you like it, post your comment below and
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let
me know what do you
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think
about it. Thank you for listening.
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IELTS letter Today I’m glad for this opportunity to describe my house

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325 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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