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To write to complain about iron which has defect

To write to complain about iron which has defect ewQYJ

Dear Sir, On November 9, 2021, I purchased an iron from your company. A week ago I noticed that it had defects. For instance, it did not work when I was using it. I was shocked to see that. A technician of your factory tried to fix it but he did not cope it. I am sorry to inform you that about the iron. I must point out that you have to change it for a new one. But I did not spoil it. Because it was defective when I bought it. In addition, if I use from it, it shrinks my new dresses. I feel very puzzled that situation. So, the iron suddenly stops working. I have to say, I went to your company and I complained about it. But your employees treated badly to me in your factory. It is very rude condition. I think the best way to solve the problem is to replace it with a better one. I hope you will look into the matter and give me an immediate reply. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Larry Smith.

Dear Sir,

On November 9, 2021, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 an iron from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

A week ago I noticed that it had defects. For instance
, it did not work when I was using it. I was shocked
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that. A technician of your factory tried to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he did not cope it. I am sorry to inform you that about the iron. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 point out that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 it for a new one.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I did not spoil it. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 it was defective when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 it. In addition
, if I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 from it, it shrinks my new dresses. I feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 puzzled that situation. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, the iron suddenly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
 working. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 say, I went to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and I complained about it. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 your employees treated badly
 to me in your factory. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 rude condition. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the best way to solve the problem is to replace it with a better one. I hope you will look into the matter and give me an immediate reply.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully
,

Larry Smith. 