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you have recently seen an advert on Facebook for position Hotel Receptionist and I would like to apply with interest.

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Dear Sir/ Madam I have recently seen an advert on Facebook for position Hotel Receptionist and I would like to apply with interest. I completed Bachelor degree with English major in 2019. I am at present working similar position for AH Hotel, where the last two years I have been responsible for being the first point of contact for all guests visiting hotel. Apart from my superb customer service skills, I also fully competent in front office operation, dealing with guest’s queries, checking guests in and out, operating the telephone switchboard, allocating the guest bedrooms on the hotel booking system. In addion to this, and as per your requirements, I am capble of greeting all guests in a professional, friendly, courteous manner and have extensive knowledge about hotel’s facilities and services. Please consider the enclosed resume to know more about professionalism, background and skills. I look forward to meeting you and discussing my qualifications in more detail.
Dear Sir/ Madam

I have recently
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an advert on Facebook for position
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Hotel
Receptionist and I would like to apply with interest.

I completed Bachelor degree with English major in 2019. I am at present working similar position for AH
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Hotel
, where the last two years I have been responsible for being the
first
point of contact for all
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guests
visiting hotel.

Apart from my superb customer service
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skills
, I
also
fully
competent in front office operation, dealing with
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guest’s
queries, checking
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guests
in and out, operating the telephone switchboard, allocating the
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guest
bedrooms on the
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hotel
booking system. In
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addion
to this, and as per your requirements, I am
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capble
of greeting all
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guests
in a professional, friendly, courteous manner and have extensive knowledge about
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hotel’s
facilities and services.

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Please
consider the enclosed resume to know more about professionalism, background and
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skills
. I look forward to meeting you and discussing my qualifications in more detail.
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IELTS letter you have recently seen an advert on Facebook for position Hotel Receptionist and I would like to apply with interest.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
157 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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