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Write a letter to the college accommodation manager and explain how your work is becoming difficult because of your roommate. Explain the current situation. What problems are you facing and what kind of room you want.

Write a letter to the college accommodation manager and explain how your work is becoming difficult because of your roommate. Explain the current situation. What problems are you facing and what kind of room you want. lqojK
Dear Sir, I am a student of your college, currently living at the girls hostel in room no. 505. My of writing is to let you know that I am unhappy with my roommate because of multiple reasons. the situation Firstly, if I will explain the sinario then I would say that this problem has started 3 months age, when my old room partner left the hostel and a new student came as my roommate. Actually, she sleeps very late at night and plays the lound music all the time. As a results, neither I am able focus on my studies nor able to sleep properly. In addition, she is always on phone and least interested in the studies. So kindly understand my situation and either shift my roommate or change my room. To be precise, I want a quiet room partner who is more quiet and sincere in studies. Hope you would understand my miserable situation and do the needful soon. Yours faithfullyPrity
Dear Sir, I am a student of your college,
currently
living at the girls hostel in
room
no. 505. My of writing is to
let
you know that I am unhappy with my roommate
because
of multiple reasons.
the
situation
Firstly
, if I will
explain
the
sinario
then I would say that this problem has
started
3 months age, when my
old
room
partner
left
the hostel and a new student came as my roommate. Actually, she sleeps
very
late at night and plays the
lound
music all the time. As
a results
, neither I am able focus on my studies nor able to sleep
properly
.
In addition
, she is always on phone and least interested in the studies.
So
kindly understand my situation and either shift my roommate or
change
my
room
. To be precise, I want a quiet
room
partner who is more quiet and sincere in studies. Hope you would understand my miserable situation and do the needful
soon
.

Yours
faithfullyPrity
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the college accommodation manager and explain how your work is becoming difficult because of your roommate. Explain the current situation. What problems are you facing and what kind of room you want.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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