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You had an appointment to meet someone but you were not able to make it. Explain the reasons why you couldn’t be there. Tell him/her how you tried contacting him/her. Request another meeting.

You had an appointment to meet someone but you were not able to make it. Explain the reasons why you couldn’t be there. Tell him/her how you tried contacting him/her. Request another meeting. nxGnn
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Ganesh Acharya. Last Month, I called to Scotia bank and booked an appointment for discussion about home loan with Mr Haresh Patel. They gave me appointment of December 1. I am writing this letter to apologize for not attended my last meeting with Mr. Patel due to some personal emergency work comes up. I planned to left my place at 8 AM as bank people gave me an appointment for 9AM. My uncle came from his room and told me that her wife has a severe pain the chest. So, I called for an ambulance and left for the hospital. It took me more than 8 hours to finish up all the necessary tests. Later in the afternoon, I realized about the meeting. As I missed my last appointment, can you please book another appointment with Mr. Harish? I am free in upcoming week, so you can book me any time between 10 December to 15 December. It would be great help. My contact number is 9195989656, in case you need to send me confirmation message over the phone. Please consider my apology and will waiting for your response for another meeting. Yours Faithfully, Ganesh Acharya
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Ganesh
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Acharya
. Last Month, I called to Scotia bank and booked an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appointment
for discussion about home loan with Mr
Possible spelling mistake found.
Haresh
Patel. They gave me
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appointment
of December 1. I am writing this letter to apologize for not attended my last meeting with Mr. Patel due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
personal emergency work
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
up.

I planned to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my place at 8 AM as bank
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
gave me an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appointment
for 9AM. My uncle came from his room and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that her wife has a severe pain the chest.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I called for an ambulance and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
for the hospital. It took me more than 8 hours to finish up all the necessary
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tests
. Later in the afternoon, I realized about the meeting.

As I missed my last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appointment
, can you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
book another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appointment
with Mr. Harish? I am free in upcoming week,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you can book me any time between 10 December to 15 December. It would be great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

My contact number is 9195989656, in case you need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me confirmation message over the phone.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
consider my apology and will waiting for your response for another meeting.

Yours
Faithfully
, Ganesh
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Acharya
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IELTS letter You had an appointment to meet someone but you were not able to make it. Explain the reasons why you couldn’t be there. Tell him/her how you tried contacting him/her. Request another meeting.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
199 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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