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To write to ask for a job to Mr Sullivan

To write to ask for a job to Mr Sullivan Dq7pa
Dear sir, I am writing to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine teaching professional. I think I have needable enough experince and qualifications for this job. I am a bachelor degree specialist and I have been teaching teenagers at secondary school. I graduated the university from Spanish linguist, apart from this I have searched into additional branches, which are related my profession, such as phsycology, pedagogy and computer science. In teaching learners l try to concentrate my focus on being responsible for improving their knowledge and behaviour on themselves fluently. Besides that I organized a club for fans who want to learn Spanish and its literature. Last year my group were able to possess scholarship in district contest among variety groups. Except this, during my student year I worked as a Spanish interpreter in a Spanish council. If you find my qualifications suitable, please contact me for an interview. Thank you for separating me your valuable time and care. Faithfully, Mr Smith.
Dear sir, I am writing to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that
was advertised
in the April edition of the magazine teaching professional. I
think
I have
needable
enough
experince
and qualifications for this job. I am a bachelor degree specialist and I have been teaching
teenagers
at secondary school.
I
graduated
the university from Spanish linguist, apart from this I have searched into additional branches, which
are related
my profession, such as
phsycology
, pedagogy and computer science. In teaching learners l try to concentrate my focus on being responsible for improving their knowledge and
behaviour
on themselves
fluently
.
Besides
that I organized a club for fans who want to learn Spanish and its literature. Last year my group were able to possess scholarship in district contest among variety groups. Except this, during my student year I worked as a Spanish interpreter in a Spanish council. If you find my qualifications suitable,
please
contact me for an interview. Thank you for separating me your valuable time and care.
Faithfully
, Mr Smith.
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IELTS letter To write to ask for a job to Mr Sullivan

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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