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I am quite happy to recevie your email . I have just heard that you are stuck in the pressure of studying .

I am quite happy to recevie your email. I have just heard that you are stuck in the pressure of studying. G3pYB
Dear Anna, I am quite happy to recevie your email. I have just heard that you are stuck in the pressure of studying. I know that shool things are not easy, especially at this time when we have to face the pandemic Covid 19. Every day, we all meet some difficulties of studying. Also, we sometimes solve our family stuff. Therefore, share your problems with me naturally if you feel tired. Here, I would like to give you some my advice. When you feel stressful, you just relax by listening to the songs you love and drinking a cup of coffee. Additionally, you should spend a little time playing games or reading comic books. Watching a movie is also what I do mention. Last but not least, breath the fresh air and make your challenges disappear. Remember that i am ready to make your problems clear with you. Sincerely, Truc
Dear Anna, I am quite happy to
recevie
your email. I have
just
heard that you
are stuck
in the pressure of studying. I know that
shool
things are not easy,
especially
at this time when we
have to
face the pandemic
Covid 19
. Every day, we all
meet
some
difficulties of studying.
Also
, we
sometimes
solve our family stuff.
Therefore
, share your problems with me
naturally
if you feel tired. Here, I would like to give you
some my advice
. When you feel stressful, you
just
relax by listening to the songs you
love
and drinking a cup of coffee.
Additionally
, you should spend a
little
time playing games or reading comic books. Watching a movie is
also
what I do mention. Last
but
not least, breath the fresh air and
make
your challenges disappear.

Remember that
i
am ready to
make
your problems
clear
with you.

Sincerely
,

Truc
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IELTS letter I am quite happy to recevie your email. I have just heard that you are stuck in the pressure of studying.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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