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Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager.

Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. 3bl6m

Dear Manager, I am writing to you to share my honest feedback on the new uniform introduced in the last month. First of all, I appreciate that workers’ request on the design of the new uniform was seriously considered. It feels like a professional and comfortable one. We hope to be even more motivated and productive with the new dress. However, I would like to inform you that the fitting of the dress does not seem to be accurate for many employees. I believe there has been a mistake while recording the measurements for our new dress as many of us have received extra-large sizes for their fit. I think these larger ones should be taken back and stored in the warehouse for new joiners. So the employees who are left without their dress can be provided with another pair with appropriate size. Until we receive the same, we can continue in our old dress to maintain the decorum of the company. I thank you to be an active manager and look forward to understanding our issue. Yours sincerely, Taufiq

Dear Manager,

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 uniform introduced in the last month.

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 uniform was seriously
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 dress.

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think
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dress
 to maintain the decorum of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

I thank you to be an active manager and look forward to understanding our issue.

Yours sincerely
,

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