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To look after your house and absence

To look after your house and absence NVE5g
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to do a favour me while I am away with my family for 20 days. I am going to Tashkent next week with my family. It is the best time to see my realatives. It would be great if you can look after my home while we are away. In my opinion, you are agree to request. I know that you will not stay at my house full time so if you have free-time watering my plants. Once again, I really appreciate the help you are extending to me and hope return this favour sometime. Thank you for your attentionYours faithfully, Jessica
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to do a
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
me while I am away with my family for 20 days. I am going to Tashkent
next
week with my family. It is the best time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
my
Possible spelling mistake found.
realatives
. It would be great if you can look after my home while we are away. In my opinion, you are
Consider using a past participle here: "agreed".
agree
to request. I know that you will not stay at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
full time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
if you have free-time watering my plants. Once again, I
really
appreciate the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you are extending to me and hope return this
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
sometime. Thank you for your
Possible spelling mistake found.
attentionYours
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Jessica
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IELTS letter To look after your house and absence

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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