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enquire about memory improvement course

enquire about memory improvement course VrOoJ

Dear Sir, I have come across the adverdtisement of memory improvement course hence writing to seek more information on it. During my early adulthood I was able to remember long list of vocabulary, words and tables however now a days I struggle to remember things. Due to age may be I am experiancing this or may be due to something else. The trouble in remebering address or phone numbers leads me to think in this direction and then I saw your publication on getting better at recalling things. I apears to me that the workshop would be helpful for me and the techniques you may teach would ease out the problem I am facing. I am really keen to know about what tools and technique are you going to cover in it. Also would like to know how much is it going to cost me? Since I have plan my schedule it would be realy helpful to learn about the start and end date of the event. In my opinion these informatin would help me to take my decision. You may share the details over the email. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Aleem Shaikh

Dear Sir,

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