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A reputed builder planning to do building construction on your nearby area. You came to know about this and give your opinion about this

A reputed builder planning to do building construction on your nearby area. You came to know about this and give your opinion about this KWXDM

Dear, Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter as regards to the fresh building construction which is scheduled to commence next month. I came to know about your plan while reading todays newspaper. I am exorbitantly jubilant about your building construction plan Rosewood are. However, due to the fact that, in order to reinforce the monument you must do all kind of piling works, consequently it may impinge badly to our community. So that, I would like to render some options in terms of avoiding any future complaints from our society. Nonetheless, owing to the fact that, since numerous advanced electrical equipment are available nowadays, therefore, it is much ameliorated to utilize such instruments for same, such as electric hammers and cranes. As a result noise pollution will be alleviated dramatically. On the top of that, if you plan major construction jobs in the midnight it will be good for the public in day time. As you already know that Rosewood area is prominent shopping area in the city a less sound construction is a best option when it comes to non complaint building work. As you are a reputed builder ou understand very well about my concern, you will eventually take every steps to eradicate any problems in the coming future. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Antony

Dear, Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter as regards to the fresh building You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
 which is scheduled
 to commence next
 month. I came to know about your plan while reading Possible spelling mistake found.today'stodayto days
todays
 newspaper. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am exorbitantly
 jubilant about your building You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
 plan Rosewood are. However
, due to the fact that, in order to reinforce the monument you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 do all kind of piling works, consequently
 it may impinge badly
 to our community. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 that, I would like to render This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 options in terms of avoiding any future complaints from our society.

Nonetheless, owing to the fact that, since numerous advanced electrical equipment are available nowadays, therefore
, it is much ameliorated to utilize such instruments for same, such as electric hammers and cranes. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 a result noise pollution will be alleviated
dramatically
. On the top of that, if you plan major You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
 jobs in the midnight it will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for the public in day time.

As you already know that Rosewood area is prominent shopping area in the city a less sound You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
 is Use "the" with the superlative.the
a
 best option when it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 to non complaint building work.

As you are a reputed builder Possible spelling mistake found.ofonoroutyouOK
ou
 understand This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well about my concern, you will eventually
 take every The noun should be probably in the singular form: "step"?step
steps
 to eradicate any problems in the coming future.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

Antony