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Dear Sir Madam, I am writing to inform you that I am interesting to work at the muslum as part - time volunteer which it can be an epperunity for me to improve myself at this field. Today, when I was returning back from the art institute which is nearby the museum, I noticed that you looking for some volunteers. I would like to apply to work there because it can be helpful during my studies at the institute and it will be added as an extra hours of helping services. In additim, I have require skills quel abilities that might be useful, such as I am a a good speaker, I can speak three languages and I have knew ledge ghout historical items. Therefore, I found it a sailable place to practice what studying and I will be available es all weekends of this month to start working with you. Looking forward to your response Regards Tareg
Dear Sir Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I am

interesting to work at the
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muslum
as part
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-
time volunteer

which it can be an
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epperunity
for me to
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improve
myself at

this field.

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Today
, when I was
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returning back
from the art

institute which is nearby the museum, I noticed that

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you looking
for
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some
volunteers. I would like to apply to work

there
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because
it can be helpful during my studies at the

institute and it will be
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added
as an extra
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hours
of helping

services. In
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additim
, I have
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require
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skills
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quel
abilities that

might be useful, such as I am
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a a
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good
speaker, I can speak

three languages and I have
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knew
ledge
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ghout
historical items.

Therefore
, I found it a
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sailable
place to practice what

studying and I will be available
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es
all weekends

of this month to
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start
working with you.

Looking

forward to

your response

Regards

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Tareg

IELTS letter museum near your home 00000

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  American English
5 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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