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You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there

You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there PrOLB
Dear Mr/Ms, I’m writing to you to check the availability of a suitable suite for two because I’m planning to come to Singapore for tourism next month. I will be glad if you can help with my needs. Basically, I will be in Singapore between 10th of July till the 15th. I will prefer suite to be with a nice view if possible, such as a park or beach, but if unfortunately not available kindly send for me different alternatives and I have to think of them. Also, another matter to be mentioned that I would like to request an extra pillow, blanket and daily seasonal fruits basket. In the end and according to my requests, I would like you to attach all the details in the quotation, in order to let me understand how much it will cost me. I look forward to your quick response. Best regards, Tareq
Dear Mr/Ms,

I’m writing to you to
check
the availability of a suitable suite for two
because
I’m planning to
come
to Singapore for tourism
next
month. I will be glad if you can
help
with my needs.

Basically
, I will be in Singapore between 10th of July till the 15th. I will prefer suite to be with a nice view if possible, such as a park or beach,
but
if unfortunately not available kindly
send
for me
different
alternatives and I
have to
think
of them.
Also
, another matter to
be mentioned
that I would like to request an extra pillow, blanket and daily seasonal fruits basket. In the
end
and according to my requests, I would like you to attach all the
details
in the quotation, in order to
let
me understand how much it will cost me.

I look forward to your quick response.

Best regards,

Tareq
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IELTS letter You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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