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To go to college or to try to get a job

To go to college or to try to get a job Eq5rr
Der John. I am writing in reply to your letters asking for advice. First of all, you need read and learn your subjects. For example: mother tangue, math, english, biology, literature and other subjects. If you do not learn, you need go a well job. Jobs are very a lot For example: driver, cooker, master and other jobs. Jobs are too very interesting. But, now we need learn. If now we read, future working a good company. If you do not like learn, you must working. My a good idea for them learn subjects. For example I also learn subjects. I future go a famous colleges. Now many people learned. I do not like worked. The world have a lot of colleges. They are most famous Oxford, Cambridge and other college. My advice you need go to college. Colleges are very interesting. Learn is very famous. I choose learned. Good bye. Best wishes. Bekzodjon
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Der
John. I am writing in reply to your letters asking for advice.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
read and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
.
For example
: mother
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tangue
, math,
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english
, biology, literature and other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
. If you do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
, you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
go a well
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Jobs
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
a lot
For example
: driver, cooker, master and other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jobs
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Jobs
are too
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
interesting.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
we
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
. If
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
we read, future working a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. If you do not like
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
, you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
working. My a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
for them
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
. For
The comma is probably missing here: "example, I".
example I
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
. I future go a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "college"?
colleges
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
learned. I do not like worked. The world have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
colleges. They are
Did you mean "the most"?
most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
Oxford, Cambridge and other college. My advice you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
go to college. Colleges are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
interesting.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Learn
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
. I choose learned.
This word is normally spelled as one.
Good bye
. Best wishes.
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Bekzodjon
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IELTS letter To go to college or to try to get a job

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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