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Freind for Advice Letter in the school

Freind for Advice Letter in the school dpgaX
Dear MukhammadjonYou should giving advise to go to collage or to try to get a JobNow freind you read. Becauuse lost time is never found again. Now Moment educated pupils for. Now time there is read. After time bent. You now not work. You very hard read. After to read. Prep you work night mornind raed. To work too Read It is comfortable for you also one v advice you walk every day. Because it is be calm your brain and you preppaere hander you be calm you a preppaere hander and one advice for you are relax one day before your exem. FUture door you for open. Only you read. But leave result bed objects v carry be brought consider. calculation book make first pron objekt look suffice pron int read either happent work choose. Them too you like to be. It is attept hair you bealive. I too you verry hard ecalive freind. You one time them exercise too boss sings vichs working and stadiying. Best Wishes Mo'ydinov Ilkhomjon.
Dear
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MukhammadjonYou
should
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "give"
giving
The word 'advise' is a verb. Did you mean "advice" (noun)?
advise
Did you mean "going"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'advise' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
to go
to collage or to try to
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get
a
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JobNow
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freind
you
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read
.
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Becauuse
lost
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time
is never found again.
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Now
Moment educated pupils for.
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Now
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time
there is
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read
. After
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time
bent. You
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now
not
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work
. You
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very
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hard
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read
. After to
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read
. Prep you
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work
night
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mornind
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raed
. To
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work
too
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Read
It is comfortable for you
also
one v advice you walk every day.
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Because
it is
Consider using a past participle here: "been".
be
calm your brain and you
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preppaere
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hander
you be calm you a
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preppaere
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hander
and one advice for you are
Consider using a past participle here: "relaxed".
relax
one day
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before
your
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exem
.
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FUture
door you for open.
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Only
you
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read
.
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But
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leave
result bed objects v carry
be brought
consider.
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calculation
book
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make
first
pron
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objekt
look suffice pron int
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read
either
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happent
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work
choose.
Did you mean "Then"?
Them
too you like to be. It is
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attept
hair you
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bealive
. I too you
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verry
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hard
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ecalive
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freind
. You one
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time
them exercise too boss sings
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vichs
working and
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stadiying
. Best Wishes Mo'
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ydinov
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Ilkhomjon
.
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IELTS letter Freind for Advice Letter in the school

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
171 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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