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apology letter to friend for school

apology letter to friend for school a7BOw

Dear John, I am writing in reply to your letters asking for advice. First of all, you learn your subjects and you work in your free time. If you do not study, you will be unknowledge. It is harmful for you. However you are smart. I think, you need learn your subjects. If you learn haeder, you own of a good job. It is not good idea. You do not work these days. Because, you are young. Tou go to school and you go other study centres. If you do not study now, you work in bad work. So this you learn your subjects. It is interesting and helpful for you. You will be a good businessman in the future. It is my opinion. I suggest some jobs for you. There are teacher, policeman, businessman, football player, lawer and others. Teacher is a good job for you. Because, you are wonderful. But, football player is interesting. After that it is helpful for your healthy. I think, it is helpful for you. Best wishes. Good bye.

Dear John, I am writing in reply to your letters asking for advice. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenrollgetreadstudypick upreceive
learn
 your subjects and you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in your free time. If you do not study, you will be Possible spelling mistake found.knowledgeacknowledge
unknowledge
. It is harmful for you. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 you are smart. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
, you need You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenrollgetreadstudypick upreceive
learn
 your subjects. If you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenrollgetreadstudypick upreceive
learn
Possible spelling mistake found.harderheader
haeder
, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 job.

It is not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
. You do not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 these days. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
, you are young. Possible spelling mistake found.ToYouTooThouTopTour
Tou
 go to school and you go other study Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.centers
centres
. If you do not study This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 this you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenrollgetreadstudypick upreceive
learn
 your subjects. It is interesting and helpful for you. You will be a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 businessman in the future. It is my opinion.

I suggest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 jobs for you. There are teacher, policeman, businessman, football Possible agreement error. Did you mean "players"?players
player
, Possible spelling mistake found.laterlowerlaserlawyerlayerlager
lawer
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:and many more
and others
. Teacher is a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 job for you. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
, you are wonderful. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, football player is interesting. After that it is helpful for Did you mean "you're"?you're
your
 healthy. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
, it is helpful for you. Best wishes. This word is normally spelled as one.Goodbye
Good bye
. 