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To ask to help some social issue

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Sir Simpson I am writing to ask your help to settle education that is to say in elementary education in a school where l work. Now I am as a teacher. I have been a teacher for ten years in this year. I have got experience. Mostly l teach elementary classes. I am going to say some issue in kid's manuals. Especially 2-nd classes manual. If there are 26 letters in English alphabet. It has a rather difficulty learning English pronunciation for English learners uzbek children. The children would have finished them in a first term. It is complicated. If we compare with a Russian. The letters are given third term. I request you to learn to republish the 2 grade issue. And l emphasize we will have achieved if we more consolidate with a grammar rules and exercises. I hope my asking can be solved frequently. Your sincerely Sara Thompson

Sir Simpson

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help
 to settle education that is
 to say in elementary education in a school where l work. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 I am as a teacher. I have been a teacher for ten years in this year. I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 experience. Mostly
 l teach elementary classes.

I am going to say This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 issue in kid's manuals. Especially
 2-nd classes manual. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 there are 26 letters in English alphabet. It has a You used an adverb ('rather') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('difficulty') instead of another adjective.
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uzbek
 children.

The children would have finished them in a first
 term. It is complicated
. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 we compare with a Russian. The letters are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 third term.

I request you to learn to republish the 2 grade issue. And l Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphemphasize.emphasize!emphasize?emphasize:emphasize,emphasize;
emphasize


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 will have achieved if we more consolidate with a grammar This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 and exercises. I hope my asking can be solved
frequently
.

Your sincerely


Sara Thompson

IELTS letter To ask to help some social issue

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

150 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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