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To ask to help some social issue

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Sir Simpson I am writing to ask your help to settle education that is to say in elementary education in a school where l work. Now I am as a teacher. I have been a teacher for ten years in this year. I have got experience. Mostly l teach elementary classes. I am going to say some issue in kid's manuals. Especially 2-nd classes manual. If there are 26 letters in English alphabet. It has a rather difficulty learning English pronunciation for English learners uzbek children. The children would have finished them in a first term. It is complicated. If we compare with a Russian. The letters are given third term. I request you to learn to republish the 2 grade issue. And l emphasize we will have achieved if we more consolidate with a grammar rules and exercises. I hope my asking can be solved frequently. Your sincerely Sara Thompson
Sir Simpson

I am writing to ask your
help
to settle education
that is
to say in elementary education in a school where l work.
Now
I am as a teacher. I have been a teacher for ten years in this year. I have
got
experience.
Mostly
l teach elementary classes.

I am going to say
some
issue in kid's manuals.
Especially
2-nd classes manual.
If
there are 26 letters in English alphabet. It has a
rather difficulty
learning English pronunciation for English learners
uzbek
children.

The children would have finished them in a
first
term. It
is complicated
.
If
we compare with a Russian. The letters are
given
third term.

I request you to learn to republish the 2 grade issue. And l
emphasize


we
will have achieved if we more consolidate with a grammar
rules
and exercises. I hope my asking can
be solved
frequently
.

Your
sincerely


Sara Thompson
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  American English
6 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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