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Suppose you lost your luggage in an airlines, now make a complain to their concern authority.

Suppose you lost your luggage in an airlines, now make a complain to their concern authority. 8dbOG

Dear Sir/Madam, I am expressing my dissatisfaction with you that recently I came from Thailand to Bangladesh by your airlines, but lost my luggage at the end of the moment when I reached. This is a matter of fact. I am an extreme traveler among domestic and international areas where most of the time I travel with your agency where everything was a great pleasure except last one. Last week, when I went back to the airport at the receiving section to take my luggage where it took more than two hours but didn't get it. I informed the relevant staff as well as made a complaint in a written form, whereas they requested me to wait for a week. I would be grateful if you could properly initiate a search for my lost item that contained a piece of valuable equipment. I called the concerned authorities several times by hotline, but didn't get any response. Nowadays, they do not accept my phone calls. Some urgent medicines were in my luggage which are urgently required for my child. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. . Sincerely, H. M. Shah Paran

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am expressing my dissatisfaction with you that recently I came from Thailand to Bangladesh by your airlines, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 lost my luggage at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the moment when I reached.

This is a matter of fact. I am an extreme traveler among domestic and international areas where most of the time I travel with your agency where everything was a great pleasure except last one. Last week, when I went back to the airport at the receiving section to take my luggage where it took more than two hours This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it. I informed the relevant staff as well
 as made a complaint in a written form, whereas they requested me to wait for a week.

I would be grateful if you could properly
 initiate a search for my lost item that contained a piece of valuable equipment. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 called the concerned authorities several times by hotline, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 any response. Nowadays, they do not accept my phone calls. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 urgent medicines were in my luggage which are urgently
 required for my child.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
Sincerely
,

H. M. Shah Possible spelling mistake found.PaganSaranPaeanParasParanaPara
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