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Suppose you lost your luggage in an airlines, now make a complain to their concern authority.

Suppose you lost your luggage in an airlines, now make a complain to their concern authority. 8dbOG
Dear Sir/Madam, I am expressing my dissatisfaction with you that recently I came from Thailand to Bangladesh by your airlines, but lost my luggage at the end of the moment when I reached. This is a matter of fact. I am an extreme traveler among domestic and international areas where most of the time I travel with your agency where everything was a great pleasure except last one. Last week, when I went back to the airport at the receiving section to take my luggage where it took more than two hours but didn't get it. I informed the relevant staff as well as made a complaint in a written form, whereas they requested me to wait for a week. I would be grateful if you could properly initiate a search for my lost item that contained a piece of valuable equipment. I called the concerned authorities several times by hotline, but didn't get any response. Nowadays, they do not accept my phone calls. Some urgent medicines were in my luggage which are urgently required for my child. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. . Sincerely, H. M. Shah Paran
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am expressing my dissatisfaction with you that recently I came from Thailand to Bangladesh by your airlines,
but
lost my luggage at the
end
of the moment when I reached.

This is a matter of fact. I am an extreme traveler among domestic and international areas where most of the time I travel with your agency where everything was a great pleasure except last one. Last week, when I went back to the airport at the receiving section to take my luggage where it took more than two hours
but
didn't
get
it. I informed the relevant staff
as well
as made a complaint in a written form, whereas they requested me to wait for a week.

I would be grateful if you could
properly
initiate a search for my lost item that contained a piece of valuable equipment.
I
called the concerned authorities several times by hotline,
but
didn't
get
any response. Nowadays, they do not accept my phone calls.
Some
urgent medicines were in my luggage which are
urgently
required for my child.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
.
Sincerely
,

H. M. Shah
Paran
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IELTS letter Suppose you lost your luggage in an airlines, now make a complain to their concern authority.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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