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A letter to apologize for not reaching to my grandmother sooner

A letter to apologize for not reaching to my grandmother sooner 8dbV5

Hi Philomene, I hope you are doing great. I just arrived at my new home at alberta and I have been struggling with my hectic work schedule. All the same, I am doing great. I am sorry for not being able to visit last week. As you know, I was recently tranfered to Alberta following my promotion as senior public health administrator. This new duty came with a lot of excitement and huge responsibilty. These past week was realy a tight one because I had to plan and ensure the transfer of all my personal belongings and furnitures while coping with my new work environmnet. Fortunately, everything went well and I am beginning to settle. Actually, we will be taking a beak next week and there will be some spare time to relax. Certainly, I will find time to pay you a visit. Is there anything you will like me to get for you? Once more I'm sorry I couldn't see you sooner. Please don't forget to exercise regularly as prescribed by the doctor. Much love, Herve

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