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Letter to the manager of supermarket to complain on minor accident

Letter to the manager of supermarket to complain on minor accident dlx1K
Dear sir, I am corresponding this letter with regard that i reside nearby this market, where 21st Nov on Monday nearly 7pm i went to this site with my sister in law, who is pregnant, just want to purchase baby milk and prescribed medicines from this location. After taking our required things as we cross the corner of the pharmacy, however the road was quite muddy and slippery, further the whole antity was dark, even can not recognise the far away person. By the low fact, a motor cyclist came in front of me, indeed unexpected wreckage to me, as a result i could not control myself due to slippery place, so badly fell down. Though i got minor injury, but rider was also embaressed on his act, although he was not responsible in real. The long story short, It was all about your neglegence, whether you should regularly check your street lights or change those whilst are not working, more overyou should repair the damage portion of the way which is messy and wet. Hope you will take a serious and prompt action with obliged. Yours truly, Misbah Yasir Bhatti
Dear sir, I am corresponding this letter with regard that
i
reside nearby this market, where 21st Nov on Monday
nearly
7pm
i
went to this site with my
sister in law
, who is pregnant,
just
want to
purchase
baby milk and prescribed medicines from this location. After taking our required things as we cross the corner of the pharmacy,
however
the road was quite muddy and slippery,
further
the whole
antity
was dark, even can not
recognise
the far away person. By the low fact, a motor cyclist came in front of me,
indeed
unexpected wreckage to me,
as a result
i
could not control myself due to slippery place,
so
badly
fell down. Though
i
got
minor injury,
but
rider was
also
embaressed
on his act, although he was not responsible in real. The long story short, It was all about your
neglegence
, whether you should
regularly
check
your street lights or
change
those whilst are not working, more
overyou
should repair the damage portion of the way which is messy and wet.

Hope you will take a serious and prompt action with obliged.

Yours
truly
,

Misbah
Yasir
Bhatti
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IELTS letter Letter to the manager of supermarket to complain on minor accident

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
190 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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