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Write a letter to your neighbour who is having animals in his/ her garden.Yov and your family members are having problems with the animals.

Write a letter to your neighbour who is having animals in his/ her garden. Yov and your family members are having problems with the animals. 9wROj
Dear sir, I am Namrata Sonani, my flat number is D-602 and I am living to your next door plus I appreciate to your loving, and caring nature towards the animals but, I have complain about your pet, ans I think you are consider this problem. As you know that our front balcony is joint togather and your dog is openly walk there consequently my brother's little bady is so scared from your dog 'Rockey'. She just shouted whenever she saw the rockey. Sometime it barking at afternoon, and the next room my grandparents are sleeping at the same time therefore they are disturb beacuse of the barking by rockey. They are not so well for their age. I have minor tips to save the problem and that firstly, when your dog come out the balcony your family always try to be with them, and secondly In the noon time you should take them in another room to your house, so my grandparents sleep peacefully. I hope you early taking action on this matter. I look forward to your prompt action. Yours faithfully, Namrata Sonani
Dear sir, I am
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Namrata
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Sonani
, my flat number is
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D-602 and
I am living to your
next
door plus I appreciate to your loving, and caring nature towards the animals
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but
, I have
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complain
about your pet, ans I
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think
you are
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consider
this problem.

As you know that our front balcony is joint
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togather
and your dog is
openly
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walk
there
consequently
my brother's
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little
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bady
is
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so
scared from your dog '
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Rockey
'. She
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just
shouted whenever she
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saw
the
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rockey
. Sometime
Did you mean "it's barking", "it is barking", or "it was barking"?
it barking
at afternoon, and the
next
room my grandparents are sleeping at the same time
therefore
they are
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disturb
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beacuse
of the barking by
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rockey
. They are not
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so
well for their age.

I have minor tips to save the problem and that
firstly
, when your dog
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
out the balcony your family always try to be with them, and
secondly
In the noon time you should take them in another room to your
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house
,
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so
my grandparents sleep
peacefully
. I hope you early taking action on this matter.
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I
look forward to your prompt action.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Namrata
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Sonani
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbour who is having animals in his/ her garden. Yov and your family members are having problems with the animals.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
184 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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