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This is to express my thanks for teaching me English language.

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Dear Mr. Haghgozar This is to express my thanks for teaching me English language. As you know, I have to take IELTS exam very soon for immigration to Canada. As a matter of fact we meet for studying every day to improve my skills. More than 10 hours so you can share with me all you knew. Needless to say, due to covid—19 we can not sit in my room so we study in the balcony for fresh air, but it is very difficult for us, because there is a lot of noise and it is too hot sometimes or windy. Before the outbreak of covid-19 studying was easier, but nowadays only online or open-air is very different to me. My request is that you switch my classes to night hours, because weather is much better compared to morning and sunny days. Please improve my classes and I promise you, I will be the best student of the world and will pass the exam as soon as possible. Yours sincerely Kiarash Fadavi
Dear Mr.
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Haghgozar


This is to express my thanks for teaching me English language.

As you know, I
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have to
take IELTS exam
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very
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soon
for immigration to Canada.

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meet
for studying every day to
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improve
my
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skills
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More than 10 hours
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so
you can share with me all you knew.

Needless to say, due to
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covid
—19 we can not sit in my room
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so
we study in the balcony for fresh air,
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it is
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very
difficult for us,
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because
there is
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a lot of
noise and it is too hot
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sometimes
or windy.

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Before
the outbreak of
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covid-19
studying was easier,
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but
nowadays
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only
online or open-air is
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very
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different
to me.

My request is that you switch my classes to night hours,
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because
weather is much better compared to morning and sunny days.

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Please
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improve
my classes and I promise you, I will be the best student of the world and will pass the exam as
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soon
as possible.

Yours
sincerely


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Kiarash
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IELTS letter This is to express my thanks for teaching me English language.

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
171 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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