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Music in your country, music you like

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Dear Jack, I’d love to find out that you want to know about music in my country. There are many kinds of music in Vietnam: imperial court music, folk music (cheo, xam, quan ho, chau van, ca tru, ho…), classical music for refugees or Yellow Music, revolutionary songs or Red Music… But us, the new generation of people in Vietnam prefer modern music – pop music or rock heavy metal. There are so many live concerts, from city to the country. If you live in Ha Noi, or Ho Chi Minh city, you can go to live concerts every week. You can also listen to live music in small bars, where you can hear from unknown singers. You can go to big stage, like the stadium to listen to the big stars, or your idols, even the worldwide celebrities. In my free time, I’d like to hear pop music. During the recent years such as 2006 and beyond, Vietnamese pop music has tremendously improved from years past. Vietnamese music has been able to widen its reach to audiences nationally and also overseas. I love My Tam music. She had been awarded Best Asian Artist Award in 2012 MAMA prize. Most of her songs is about love and the lives around us. I also love her voice very much. What’s about your favourite music? Tell me in your next letter. Love,
Dear Jack,

I’d
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in my country.

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kinds of
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in Vietnam: imperial court
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, folk
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(
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cheo
,
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xam
,
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quan
ho,
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chau
van, ca
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for refugees or Yellow
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, revolutionary songs or Red
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Music…
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us, the new generation of
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people
in Vietnam prefer modern
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music
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–
pop
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music
or rock heavy metal.

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many
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concerts, from city to the country. If you
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in Ha
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Noi
, or
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Ho Chi Minh city
, you can go to
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concerts every week. You can
also
listen to
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music
in
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small
bars, where you can hear from unknown singers. You can go to
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stage, like the stadium to listen to the
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big
stars, or your idols, even the worldwide celebrities.

In my free time, I’d like to hear pop
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music
. During the recent years such as 2006 and beyond, Vietnamese pop
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has
tremendously
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improved
from years past. Vietnamese
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music
has been able to widen its reach to audiences
nationally
and
also
overseas. I
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love
My Tam
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music
. She had
been awarded
Best Asian Artist Award in 2012
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MAMA
prize. Most of her songs is about
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love
and the
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lives
around us. I
also
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love
her voice
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much.

What’s about your
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favourite
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?
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IELTS letter Music in your country, music you like

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230 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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