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Nurse position at the hospital

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Dear Ann I am writing to express my interest in the Nurse position you listed recently on the Hospital. I have reviewed advertising about the need for a nurse web page and am very impressed with your hospital's commitment to excelent patients and workers service and you have all the condition in your hospital. I will be graduating from Medicine University in September and am actively seeking a nurse position. As you will note in the enclosed resume, I have had practical experience with patients. I have compled several nurse courses so far. As well as I have also wonhonorable achievements in many even competions and these achievements helped to increase knowledge of my work. I would like to explore nurse position with your further. I will be in Jizzakh the September 9th and I want to meet and talk with you. Should you need additional information please cal me at 91 234 56 78. I look forward to replying from you. Genuinely
Dear Ann I am writing to express my interest in the
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position you listed recently on the Hospital. I have reviewed advertising about the need for a
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nurse
web page and am
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impressed with your hospital's commitment to
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excelent
patients and workers service and you have all the condition in your hospital. I will be graduating from Medicine University in September and am
actively
seeking a
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nurse
position. As you will note in the enclosed resume, I have had practical experience with patients. I have
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compled
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nurse
courses
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wonhonorable
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competions
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helped
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. I will be in
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Jizzakh
the September 9th and I want to
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meet
and talk with you. Should you need additional information
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cal me at 91 234 56 78. I look forward to replying from you.
Genuinely
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IELTS letter Nurse position at the hospital

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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