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Hi Maryam, I hope everything is going well with you and your family in Iran and you are in good health. As I have heard from Haleh you now have a baby. Congratulations! ! ! ! It was really great news! ! First I am so sorry and I want to apologize to you a lot, because I could not inform you about my projects possess during this time. You know after the last time I sent an email to you, I have had a variety of incidents. Both in my family life and at work. While I had the chance of spending a safe pregnancy and then my lovely daughter, Melorin, was born I struggled with my mother’s and as well as my husband’s illness. My mother had a Cancerous mass in her uterus and Fortunately, she recovered after two surgeries and several months of rest. On the other hand, my husband got the Corona virus at the last month of my pregnancy. they were really awful experiences for me, a period full of stress and fear of losing them. Also, when my daughter was 1 month old, unfortunately I realized that I had malignant thyroid cancer and that I needed to have an emergency operation and receive radiotherapy. as a result, during 20 days I didn’t able to see my child for keeping her safe from my body’s radiation. Fortunately, after all these problems, I have recovered now and I feel better. Although we have been vaccinated, we are in quarantine due to the increase in the number of Corona virus patients, so my husband does his work online from home. As a result, I have this chance of spending a plenty of my time with my small family. Also about my projects, you know, despite all my efforts and costs that I paid to get facilities for carrying out my experiments, I am still waiting for solving the problems and modifying the flume’s cross section. And you know nobody from university pay attention to these situations that have happened to me. All of them discouraged me a lot and I have decided to quit this course and I started to apply for a PhD position, which was delayed for solving all mentioned problems, in some foreign countries. As you know one of requirements for applying possess is having recommendation letter from our supervisors and academic colleagues. This letter is usually uploaded on the emailed links from universities accompanying with a form which supervisor should fill up. I am so pleased if you could help me with this. Moreover, I am so graceful if you can introduce me some professors from Australia who you have known and I will be able to request a Phd position from them. What about Marco? Do you think if I explain my decision to and requesting a Phd position from him? Regards Shabnam
Hi
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Maryam
,

I hope everything is going well with you and your family in Iran and you are in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
health.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
I have heard from
Possible spelling mistake found.
Haleh
you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
have a baby. Congratulations! ! ! ! It was
really
great news! !

First
I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
sorry and I want to apologize to you a lot,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I could not inform you about my projects possess during this time. You
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
after the last time I
Consider using "emailed".
sent an email to
you, I have had a variety of incidents. Both in my family life and at work.

While I had the chance of spending a safe pregnancy and then my lovely daughter,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Melorin
,
was born
I struggled with my mother’s and
as well
as my husband’s illness. My mother had a Cancerous mass in her uterus and
Fortunately
, she recovered after two surgeries and several months of rest.
On the other hand
, my husband
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the
The term "Coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.
Corona virus
at the last month of my pregnancy.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
they
were
really
awful experiences for me, a period full of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
and fear of losing them.

Also
, when my daughter was 1 month
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
, unfortunately I realized that I had malignant thyroid cancer and that I needed to have an emergency operation and receive radiotherapy.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
as
a result, during 20 days I didn’t able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
my child for keeping her safe from my body’s radiation.

Fortunately
,
after all
these problems, I have recovered
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
and I feel better. Although we have
been vaccinated
, we are in quarantine due to the increase in the number of
The term "Coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.
Corona virus
patients,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
my husband does his work online from home.
As a result
, I have this chance of spending a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of my time with my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
family.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
about my projects, you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
, despite all my efforts and costs that I paid to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
facilities for carrying out my experiments, I am
still
waiting for solving the problems and modifying the flume’s cross section. And you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
nobody from university pay attention to these situations that have happened to me. All of them discouraged me a lot and I have decided to quit this course and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to apply for a PhD position, which
was delayed
for solving all mentioned problems, in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
foreign countries.

As you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
one of requirements for
Probably a preposition is missing after 'applying'.
applying possess
is having recommendation letter from our supervisors and academic colleagues. This letter is
usually
uploaded on the emailed links from universities
The usual collocation for "accompany" is "by," not "with." It is better to say this: "accompanying by".
accompanying with
a form which supervisor should fill up. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me with this.

Moreover
, I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
graceful if you can introduce me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
professors from Australia who you have known and I will be able to request a
The more common abbreviation of the term 'philosophiae doctor' is "PhD".
Phd
position from them. What about Marco? Do you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
if I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
my decision to and requesting a
The more common abbreviation of the term 'philosophiae doctor' is "PhD".
Phd
position from him?

Regards

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Shabnam
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IELTS letter letter for requesting recommendation

Letter
  American English
11 paragraphs
480 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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