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A friend of ypurs is thinking about applying for the course that you did

A friend of ypurs is thinking about applying for the course that you did 8gNgG
Dear Victor, Hope you are doing great. Thank you for considering and trusting me with such an essential decision. So, here is what I have to say in response to your queries about a post graduate degree in computer application at Punjab university. I understand that you want to pursue a computer application course from the university ofPunjabwhich I attended. First, this is 3 years' program which is further divided in six semesters having 2 semesters each year. Moreover, this course is not for someone who lacks good command in computer. It took quite a long time initially for me to understand the terminology in the subject. Since I know you that, you will grab this subject easily. However, fee structure for this program is quite high. Of course, the good thing is that the academy, you are choosing, is counted in top of 10 educational institution over the globe. Furthermore, a number of the best faculty members teach you merely what you need to succeed. Hence, merely visit the university website at www. monash. edu to learn more about how to apply online, or just call the admission officer to ask him or her to send you the admission form in the mail, if you want to proceed further. Take care. See you soon.
Dear Victor,

Hope you are doing great. Thank you for considering and trusting me with such an essential decision.
So
, here is what I
have to
say in response to your queries about a post graduate degree in computer application at Punjab university.

I understand that you want to pursue a computer application course from the university
ofPunjabwhich
I attended.
First
, this is 3 years' program which is
further
divided in six semesters having 2 semesters each year.
Moreover
, this course is not for someone who lacks
good
command in computer. It took quite a long time
initially
for me to understand the terminology in the subject. Since I know you that, you will grab this subject
easily
.
However
, fee structure for this program is quite high.

Of course
, the
good
thing is that the academy, you are choosing,
is counted
in top of 10 educational institution over the globe.
Furthermore
, a number of the best faculty members teach you
merely
what you need to succeed.

Hence
,
merely
visit the university website at
www
.
monash
.
edu
to learn more about how to apply online, or
just
call the admission officer to ask him or her to
send
you the admission form in the mail, if you want to proceed
further
.

Take care.
See
you
soon
.
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IELTS letter A friend of ypurs is thinking about applying for the course that you did

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6 paragraphs
215 words
6.0
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