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You read an article about Dollar Shop selling many products that are harmful to health. You have no right to shut this shop, but you want the newspaper editor to write your cause. In your letter, Explain the situation Say what action you would like the newspaper to take Describe negatives to convince the -newspaper editor.

You read an article about Dollar Shop selling many products that are harmful to health. You have no right to shut this shop, but you want the newspaper editor to write your cause. In your letter, Explain the situation Say what action you would like the newspaper to take Describe negatives to convince the -newspaper editor. Ba9R9
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Meena Mathur- a social activist cum ordinary woman. I write this letter to seek your help to expose the flip side of Dollar Shop. Being to a social worker, I always work for betterment of the community. And when I came to know about the fraud of the Dollar shop from an article, I have straightforwardly decided to highlight it. An article “Another aspect of big firms" informed that the Dollar Shop sells expired and toxic items which can have many detrimental effects on human bodies. Eating out-dated products may lead to food poisoning, also toxic chemicals can be responsible for fatal health issues such as cancer, and tuberculosis. Ergo, I want to make people aware about such consequences. So, kindly support me. Single-hand protest will not be enough to expose this devil. In such a case, being a public servant only your agency can assist me. I would like to request you to publicize mentioned things in your newspaper. I solicit co-operation. For further details you can mail me; mMathur@gmail. com Yours faithfully, Meena Mathur
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am
Meena
Mathur
- a social activist
cum
ordinary woman. I write this letter to seek your
help
to expose the flip side of Dollar Shop.

Being to a social worker, I always work for betterment of the community. And when I came to know about the fraud of the Dollar shop from an article, I have
straightforwardly
decided to highlight it. An article “Another aspect of
big
firms
"
informed that the Dollar Shop sells expired and toxic items which can have
many
detrimental effects on human bodies. Eating out-dated products may lead to food poisoning,
also
toxic chemicals can be responsible for fatal health issues such as cancer, and tuberculosis. Ergo, I want to
make
people
aware about such consequences.

So
, kindly support me. Single-hand protest will not be
enough
to expose this devil. In such a case, being a public servant
only
your agency can assist me. I would like to request you to publicize mentioned things in your newspaper.

I solicit co-operation. For
further
details
you can mail me;
mMathur@gmail
.
com


Yours
faithfully
,

Meena
Mathur
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IELTS letter You read an article about Dollar Shop selling many products that are harmful to health. You have no right to shut this shop, but you want the newspaper editor to write your cause. In your letter, Explain the situation Say what action you would like the newspaper to take Describe negatives to convince the -newspaper editor.

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