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You recently went to visit a friend in his new home.Write a letter to your friend

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Dear Jenny, I hope you and your family are doing well. Firstly, thankyou for inviting me to your new house. We had a great time in your house. Your house is fancy and most important thing which I like the most is that it is located in hub of a town as well as garden is an eye-attraction part. The entire design of house is very impressive which I fell in love with. The most enjoyable thing was spending a quality time with you after a long time. The traditional food made by your mother was very delicious and in the night time we had a barbeque party with music. In the month of September, we have a long weekend. So, I am planning to invite you as well as our other friends. It will be a great time again. Thanks Again and see you very soon. With best regards, Loveleen Kaur
Dear Jenny,

I hope you and your family are doing well.
Firstly
,
thankyou
for inviting me to your new
house
. We had a great
time
in your
house
. Your
house
is fancy and most
important
thing which I like the most is that it
is located
in hub of a town
as well
as garden is an eye-attraction part. The entire design of
house
is
very
impressive which I fell in
love
with.

The most enjoyable thing was spending a quality
time
with you after a long
time
.
The
traditional food made by your mother was
very
delicious and in the night
time
we had a
barbeque
party with music. In the month of September, we have a long weekend.
So
, I am planning to invite you
as well
as our other friends. It will be a great
time
again.

Thanks Again and
see
you
very
soon
.

With best regards,

Loveleen
Kaur
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IELTS letter You recently went to visit a friend in his new home. Write a letter to your friend

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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