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Giving information to a friend about adventure sports centre

Giving information to a friend about adventure sports centre DNaWo

Dear Jessica, Hi! How are you? It was very nice to hear from you recently! I got it from your letter that you are interested in the adventure sports centre I went to. I must tell you it was awesome! I had a really great time, and that’s why if you have time go there and enjoy yourself. Here I’m going to give you some more information about it. You should know that my stay there was very well organised and there was a fixed schedule for every day – you do different activities. Honestly, I found some of the activities rather scary and risky although there was a qualified teacher with everyone and everything was pretty safe. That’s why, I didn’t try diving and agreed to try rock climbing and canoeing only on second thought. However, most of the activities were very enjoyable and great fun. I would absolutely go for the assault course, the camp in the woods or the building of a raft again! To cap it all, the last day was amazing since I enjoyed myself enormously and mad a lot of new friends! In my opinion, it was a great holiday and I assure you that your stay will be absolutely safe and enjoyable! I look forward to hearing from you! Mary, love

Dear Jessica,

Hi! How are you? It was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 nice to hear from you recently! I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 it from your letter that you

are interested
 in the adventure sports Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 I went to. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you it was awesome! Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 had a

really
 great time, and that’s why if you have time go there and enjoy yourself.

Here I’m going to give you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 more information about it. You should know that my stay

there was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-organised
well organised
 and there was a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 schedule Did you mean "for everyday"?for everyday
for every day
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
 you do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different


activities. Honestly
, I found If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 activities rather
 scary and risky although there was a

qualified teacher with everyone and everything was pretty safe. That’s why, I didn’t try

diving and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 to try rock climbing and canoeing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 on second This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
. However
, most

of the activities were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 enjoyable and great fun.

I would absolutely
 go for the assault course, the camp in the woods or the building of a raft

again! To cap it all, the last day was amazing since I enjoyed myself enormously
 and mad a

lot of new friends!

In my opinion, it was a great holiday and I assure you that your stay will be absolutely
 safe

and enjoyable!

I look forward to hearing from you!

Mary, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love