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Invitation letter to manager of other department

Invitation letter to manager of other department pLb7a
Dear Sir On behalf of my colleguies you are cordially invited to our department. We arranged the meeting to solve the main problems which you are interested in. It will be hold the first of monday of november. As for location and time, it will be organized im our local department building at 10 o'clockThere will be many suggestions on impoving the state of company. Firstly, We are going to increase the staffs' salary. In our own opinion, it encourages them to attemp their works. Naturally, your participiatingis profitable for future in our workplace. Especially your presentation maybe intails to flourish our company. I would be appreciate if you visited our meeting as possible as you couldPlease confirm recieving on my massage and response to it as soon as possible until first monday of november which is shown at the beginning of my letterI look forward to waiting your reply to my invitationYour sincerelyAdam Smith
Dear Sir On behalf of my
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colleguies
you are
cordially
invited to our department. We arranged the meeting to solve the main problems which you
are interested
in. It will be hold the
first
of
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monday
of
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november
. As for location and time, it will be
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organized im
our local department building at 10 o'
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clockThere
will be
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many
suggestions on
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impoving
the state of
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company
.
Firstly
, We are going to increase the staffs' salary. In our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
opinion, it encourages them to
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attemp their
works.
Naturally
, your
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participiatingis
profitable for future in our workplace.
Especially
your presentation maybe
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intails
to flourish our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. I would be
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appreciate
if you visited our meeting as possible as you
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couldPlease
confirm
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recieving
on my massage and response to it as
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soon
as possible until
first
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monday
of
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november
which
is shown
at the beginning of my
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letterI
look forward to waiting your reply to my
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invitationYour
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sincerelyAdam
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Smith

IELTS letter Invitation letter to manager of other department

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
154 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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