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apply for the course of Erasmus+ International Credit Mobility project between University of Calabria (UNICAL) and Hanoi University (HANU), Vietnam.

apply for the course of Erasmus+ International Credit Mobility project between University of Calabria (UNICAL) and Hanoi University (HANU), Vietnam. B7lkp
Dear Erasmus committee, My name is Le Hoang Yen and I am currently studying at Hanoi university as a student of FMT. Now I am motivated to apply for the course of Erasmus+ International Credit Mobility project between University of Calabria (UNICAL) and Hanoi University (HANU), Vietnam. In my point of view, this program is a huge opportunity for me to have a chance to experience a new learning environment and expand my knowledge, which is mainly about the international financial situations for my further awareness of finance fields. Furthermore, I am interested in learning and finding out about the world financial system and operation. Therefore, my wish to apply for this course is especially important for me and I am very eager to adapt and know more about this field. Since my first year at university, I have found a part-time job and applied as a teaching assistant for Apollo English Center which is located in Hanoi, Vietnam. During this time, I can say that I am more confident in management and communication. In addition, English is a compulsory language in the center, thus, I can communicate with native speakers and understand more about foreign countries' culture while I am working plus with studying English in my university. With all my efforts, I am honored and received two certificates of being a good teaching assistant in summer courses for the children in Apollo center. So this course is a great opportunity for me to learn another new language which is Italian and I will be attempting to accomplish all qualifications in the near future. Beside that, during the time in my university, I am concentrating on investigating further in this field, specifically the world economic and financial aspects, so that I wish to widen my knowledge of the world financial systems and operation through this programme.
Dear Erasmus committee,

My name is Le
Hoang
Yen and
I am
currently
studying at Hanoi
university
as a student of FMT.
Now
I
am motivated
to apply for the
course
of Erasmus+ International Credit Mobility project between
University
of
Calabria
(
UNICAL
) and Hanoi
University
(
HANU
), Vietnam.

In my point of view, this program is a huge opportunity for me to have a chance to experience a new learning environment and expand my knowledge, which is
mainly
about the international
financial
situations for my
further
awareness of finance fields.
Furthermore
, I
am interested
in learning and finding out about the world
financial
system and operation.
Therefore
, my wish to apply for this
course
is
especially
important
for
me and
I am
very
eager to adapt and know more about this field.

Since my
first
year at
university
, I have found a part-time job and applied as a teaching assistant for Apollo English Center which
is located
in Hanoi, Vietnam. During this time, I can say that I am more confident in management and communication.
In addition
, English is a compulsory language in the center,
thus
, I can communicate with native speakers and understand more about foreign countries' culture while I am working plus with studying English in my
university
. With all my efforts, I
am honored
and received two certificates of being a
good
teaching assistant in summer
courses
for the children in Apollo center.
So
this
course
is a great opportunity for me to learn another new language which is Italian and I will be attempting to accomplish all qualifications in the near future. Beside that, during the time in my
university
, I am concentrating on investigating
further
in this field,
specifically
the world economic and
financial
aspects,
so
that I wish to widen my knowledge of the world
financial
systems and operation through this
programme
.
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IELTS letter apply for the course of Erasmus+ International Credit Mobility project between University of Calabria (UNICAL) and Hanoi University (HANU), Vietnam.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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