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There's a two-week course, you are going to take part in this course. You ask from your manager permission to participate in this course.

There's a two-week course, you are going to take part in this course. You ask from your manager permission to participate in this course. 8aG75
Dear Sir, I'm going to explain workable facets of this course which helps to improve staff's qualification. Also, it supports to manage spiny problems. You surely know this training started its activity 5 years ago. So it has already had high experiment. We know the lessons of engagement are very expensive. On the other hand, it is worth spending so much money on it. It is exact that this course improves personal skills and leadership talents. This course will urge our staff to work very hard certainly. And you know our company's future calls for special experts. We only achieve this future by working together. I hope we'll reach good progress. In my opinion, we need enough time to attend this course. In spite of the fact that we have internet settings, we won't able to have time to learn more and more. We only want you to tempt well- advised tutors. I think the course lessons don't interrupt us to work mainly missions at all. Yours faithfully Jack Brown
Dear Sir,

I'm going to
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explain
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workable
facets of this
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course
which
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helps
to
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improve
staff's qualification.
Also
, it supports to manage spiny problems. You
surely
know this training
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started
its activity 5 years ago.
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So
it has already had high experiment.

We know the lessons of engagement are
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very
expensive.
On the other hand
, it is worth spending
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so
much money on it. It is exact that this
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course
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improves
personal
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skills
and leadership talents. This
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course
will urge our staff to work
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very
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hard
certainly
. And you know our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
's future calls for special experts. We
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
achieve this future by working together.

I hope we'll reach
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
progress. In my opinion, we need
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
time to attend this
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course
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
In spite of
the fact that we have internet settings, we won't able to have time to learn more and more. We
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
want you to tempt well- advised tutors. I
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think
the
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course
lessons don't interrupt us to work
mainly
missions at all.

Yours
faithfully


Jack Brown
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IELTS letter There's a two-week course, you are going to take part in this course. You ask from your manager permission to participate in this course.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
169 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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