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There's a two-week course, you are going to take part in this course. You ask from your manager permission to participate in this course.

There's a two-week course, you are going to take part in this course. You ask from your manager permission to participate in this course. 8aG75
Dear Sir, I'm going to explain workable facets of this course which helps to improve staff's qualification. Also, it supports to manage spiny problems. You surely know this training started its activity 5 years ago. So it has already had high experiment. We know the lessons of engagement are very expensive. On the other hand, it is worth spending so much money on it. It is exact that this course improves personal skills and leadership talents. This course will urge our staff to work very hard certainly. And you know our company's future calls for special experts. We only achieve this future by working together. I hope we'll reach good progress. In my opinion, we need enough time to attend this course. In spite of the fact that we have internet settings, we won't able to have time to learn more and more. We only want you to tempt well- advised tutors. I think the course lessons don't interrupt us to work mainly missions at all. Yours faithfully Jack Brown
Dear Sir,

I'm going to
explain
workable
facets of this
course
which
helps
to
improve
staff's qualification.
Also
, it supports to manage spiny problems. You
surely
know this training
started
its activity 5 years ago.
So
it has already had high experiment.

We know the lessons of engagement are
very
expensive.
On the other hand
, it is worth spending
so
much money on it. It is exact that this
course
improves
personal
skills
and leadership talents. This
course
will urge our staff to work
very
hard
certainly
. And you know our
company
's future calls for special experts. We
only
achieve this future by working together.

I hope we'll reach
good
progress. In my opinion, we need
enough
time to attend this
course
.
In spite of
the fact that we have internet settings, we won't able to have time to learn more and more. We
only
want you to tempt well- advised tutors. I
think
the
course
lessons don't interrupt us to work
mainly
missions at all.

Yours
faithfully


Jack Brown
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IELTS letter There's a two-week course, you are going to take part in this course. You ask from your manager permission to participate in this course.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
169 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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