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letter writing for kitchen items fault

letter writing for kitchen items fault mW8GN

I am writing this letter to express my disappointment with the induction stove that I purchased from your store for Last week. I found its working condition initially very good, but after few hours of use it malfunctioned. I visited your store on 22nd may and purchased a new brand induction stove that comes with two year warranty, but main problem is, there is few hours continuous use of induction stove that time suddenly it turnoffed and create a burning smell and also it make a burning sound, so that time I turnoff stove. I contacted your store customer care service persons and complined about the faulty product but they didn't give proper response. I am attaching the copy of my bill and also mention my Order number 5773428. I think this information useful to make easy and convince of your work. During purchasing Time, your store officer assured me that within 2 years there is any malfunctioned report found in that product, it should be exchanged. so I request you to look at that Matter suggest a solution. I am ready to drive down to the store hand over the induction stove. in case the product didn't repair, kindly replace or refund me the full amount after read this letter. Looking forward to a Speedy resolution

I am writing this letter to express my disappointment with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withintroductioninauguration
induction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheaterovenmicrowavekilncookerboiler
stove
 that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 from your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 for Last week. I found its working condition initially
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after few hours of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it malfunctioned. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 visited your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 on 22nd may and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 a new brand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withintroductioninauguration
induction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheaterovenmicrowavekilncookerboiler
stove
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 with It seems that a hyphen is missing.two-year
two year
Possible agreement error. The noun 'warranty' seems to be countable, so consider using: "warranties".warranties
warranty
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 main problem is, Did you mean "there are few hours"?there are few hours
there is few hours
 continuous This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withintroductioninauguration
induction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheaterovenmicrowavekilncookerboiler
stove
 that time suddenly
 it Possible spelling mistake found.turn offed
turnoffed
 and create a burning smell and also
 it Did you mean "makes"?makes
make
 a burning sound, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that time Possible mistake. Please verify.
I turnoff
 stove.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 contacted your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 customer care service persons and Possible spelling mistake found.complainedcompliedcomp lined
complined
 about the faulty product This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they didn't give proper response. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am attaching the copy of my bill and also
 mention my Order number 5773428. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 this information useful to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 easy and convince of your work. During purchasing Time, your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 officer assured me that within 2 years there is any malfunctioned report found in that product, it should be exchanged
. Use a comma before 'so' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short)., so
so
 I request you to look at that Matter suggest a solution. I am ready to drive down to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 hand over the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withintroductioninauguration
induction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheaterovenmicrowavekilncookerboiler
stove
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 case the product didn't repair, kindly replace or refund me the full amount after read this letter. Looking forward to a Speedy Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphresolution.resolution!resolution?resolution:resolution,resolution;
resolution