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Complaing About the Roomate

Complaing About the Roomate GN30w

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with the roommate you have assigned me. His behavior is intolerable making it extremely difficult for me to study and I hope you will consider this situation favorably. Let me explain my situation. The trouble started when my roommate first moved in about three months ago. Prior to that, everything was fine; my old roommate was extremely considerate. My current roommate, however, stays up almost all night and plays incessantly loud music. As such, I have not been able to sleep properly and therefore cannot concentrate on my studies. Would you kindly transfer me or my roommate to another room? I would much prefer to live with someone who is quieter and more considerate of others. As long as it is quiet, I don't mind whom I live with. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Faithfully, Rushil Patel

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Thank you for your consideration.

Yours Faithfully
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