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You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but don't have the recipe.write a letter to your friend 1.tell your friend why you are having a party 2.explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe 3.invite your friend to the party

You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but don't have the recipe. write a letter to your friend 1. tell your friend why you are having a party 2. explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe 3. invite your friend to the party PNeK
Dear Sonia, I'm just writing this letter to tell you that I'm going to give a party on this Sunday, and I want to cook something special for my guests for which I really need your help. I'd like to arrange the party for my mom and dad' wedding anniversary. It's their 21st anniversary, and I want to make it special by a surprise party. I've planned to invite my near relatives and some of our friends. The party will be at our home in the evening. I'd like to cook a special Indian sweet dish known as Rasgulla because this is my mom's favorite. Could you please give me the recipe for this dish with all ingredients? I know your mom is an expert cook of Indian dishes. I 'd like to invite you on this special occasion and don't forget to bring aunt and uncle. It will be better if you reach a day before the gathering, so that we can make arrangements for the party. See you soon, Mandy
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give me the recipe for this dish with all ingredients? I know your mom is an expert cook of Indian dishes. I 'd like to invite you on this
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Mandy

IELTS letter You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but don't have the recipe. write a letter to your friend 1. tell your friend why you are having a party 2. explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe 3. invite your friend to the party

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