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there was a potluck event for canada day

Dear Mark, I am writing this letter to let you know that, I have enjoyed last week's event. It was a pleasure to interact with community people. However, I would like to bring one of my observations to your attention. During the event, I have noticed that most of the participants didn’t include ingredients used for their dishes. So, it was very difficult for me to choose which dish to have, as I am allergic to some types of food like nuts and seafood. Moreover, I observed that some children were in trouble when they had seafood. Therefore, placing the list of ingredients at the side of each dish would be grateful for everyone to make the right choice. May I suggest that for next year's event, we can have a meeting among the community people on what all rules to be followed for a potluck? Firstly, we need to include a list of ingredients. Secondly, listing down the dishes of what people are going to prepare on a prior basis so we can have distinct dishes. This will help to plan our event more efficiently and people can enjoy varieties of dishes without any hesitation. Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to another wonderful event coming year.

Dear Mark,

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