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There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, • Describe the construction • Explain why the construction is a problem for you • Say what you would like them to do about it

There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, • Describe the construction • Explain why the construction is a problem for you • Say what you would like them to do about it XqpyA
Dear Sir or Madam, I am resident of the Askari Town, and I am writing this letter to highlight the issue due to an on-going renovation work in the national stadium. Let me explain this in detail, the council has decided to renovate the outer look of the stadium and started working on it since two weeks ago. They have placed heavy machinery to minimize the manual work, which is operating 24 hours without a break. My house is around the corner to the construction site therefore, we are directly exposed to the noise and air pollution of machines. It is becoming a constant source of headache to me and my family and we are unable to relax and sleep in time at night. The grinding and scrapping of the floor causes mini earthquake which is a terrible experience. I am not asking to stop the work rather I would like to request you to ask the site manager to work in the day time when we are not at home and are off to our jobs, it will significantly lower our suffering. I am looking forward to your prompt action in this regard. Yours faithfully, Marry Andrew
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am resident of the
Askari
Town, and I am writing this letter to highlight the issue due to an
on-going
renovation
work
in the national stadium.

Let
me
explain
this in detail, the council has decided to renovate the outer look of the stadium and
started
working on it since two weeks ago. They have placed heavy machinery to minimize the manual
work
, which is operating 24 hours without a break.

My
house
is around the corner to the construction site
therefore
, we are
directly
exposed to the noise and air pollution of machines. It is becoming a constant source of headache to me and my
family and
we are unable to relax and sleep in time at night. The grinding and scrapping of the floor causes mini earthquake which is a terrible experience.

I am not asking to
stop
the
work
rather
I would like to request you to ask the site manager to
work
in the day time when we are not at home and are off to our jobs, it will
significantly
lower our suffering.

I am looking forward to your prompt action in this regard.

Yours
faithfully
,

Marry Andrew
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IELTS letter There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, • Describe the construction • Explain why the construction is a problem for you • Say what you would like them to do about it

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  American English
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197 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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