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November is coming. Write a letter to send to your teacher and many other teachers who have been leading you

November is coming. Write a letter to send to your teacher and many other teachers who have been leading you gWLQL
November is coming. The vast sky is as blue as the dreams of youth, thin clouds look like ribbons of silks crossing the sky with chili wind of the winter. The approach of(bỏ) November reminds us, especially those who are teachers, a special thing. It is 20-11, the Vietnamese Teacher’s day. On the occasion of this day, class 11B3 would like to thank the teachers who has beefing teaching us in Maritime high school. Particularly, we want to express our deep gratitude to Mrs Do Thi Nhan, “a boatman” who has brought us to the shore of knowledge and also the leader of this class since we began our high-school life. What makes us impressed is not only the literary acquaintance she imparts on, but also her life experience she always teaches. She teaches us to be kindhearted, to unite together as a group and to stand up after the failure, … Thanks to her, we are more mature and responsible. Furthermore, the bond between she and every 11B3 members is improved day by day through not only interesting lessons, but also exciting group activities. That was what class 11B3 and our teacher have gained after over a year. Currently, there are many enthusiastic teachers who are leading us such as Mrs Trang(English), Mr Hieu(Math) and other teachers teaching different subjects. On the occasion of 20-11, students from class 11B3 wish all the teacher in Maritime high school and those who is devoting their life to educational career a happy teacher’s day, happiness and success in life!
November is coming. The vast sky is as blue as the dreams of youth, thin clouds look like ribbons of silks crossing the sky with chili wind of the winter. The approach of(
bỏ
) November reminds us,
especially
those
who
are
teachers
, a special thing. It is 20-11, the Vietnamese
Teacher’s
day. On the occasion of this day,
class
11B3 would like to thank the
teachers
who
has
beefing teaching us in Maritime high school.
Particularly
, we want to express our deep gratitude to Mrs Do
Thi
Nhan
, “a boatman”
who
has brought us to the shore of knowledge and
also
the leader of this
class
since we began our high-school
life
. What
makes
us impressed is not
only
the literary acquaintance she imparts on,
but
also
her
life
experience she always teaches. She teaches us to
be kindhearted
, to unite together as a group and to stand up after the failure, … Thanks to her, we are more mature and responsible.
Furthermore
, the bond
between she
and every 11B3 members is
improved
day by day through not
only
interesting lessons,
but
also
exciting group activities. That was what
class
11B3 and our
teacher
have gained after over a year.

Currently
, there are
many
enthusiastic
teachers
who
are leading us such as Mrs
Trang
(English), Mr
Hieu
(Math) and other
teachers
teaching
different
subjects.

On the occasion of 20-11, students from
class
11B3 wish all the
teacher
in Maritime high school and those
who
is devoting their
life
to educational career a happy
teacher’s
day, happiness and success in
life
!
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IELTS letter November is coming. Write a letter to send to your teacher and many other teachers who have been leading you

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
257 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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