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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer pWGa
Dear John, I hope you are doing splendidly well and looking forward to enjoying your summer holidays. I am very delighted to receive your letter after a very long time and happy to know that you are planning on a camp expedition for the very first time. As an experienced camper, I would recommend you to visit the central province of Sri Lanka, such as Kandy or Ella as these places are quite ideal for camping during the summer. Besides, these places are rich in greenery and its scenic beauty could relieve you from the stress you are going through at the workplace. Moreover, you can spot various wildlife that you would be interested to take photos for your Facebook photography page. However, I must also mention the challenges faced during camping. Nature’s weather conditions are unpredictable, so it is best to be prepared for all circumstances. Also, you may come across bug bites which is quite normal during this journey. If it is alright with you, I am pleased to accompany you on your camping as it has been a long time we met since our graduation and if you have any particular questions regarding the trip, you may speak to me on the phone. Yours Truly, Max
Dear John,

I hope you are doing
splendidly
well and looking forward to enjoying your summer holidays. I am
very
delighted to receive your letter after a
very
long time and happy to know that you are planning on a camp expedition for the
very
first
time.

As an experienced camper, I would recommend you to visit the central province of Sri Lanka, such as
Kandy
or Ella as these places are quite ideal for camping during the summer.
Besides
, these places are rich in greenery and its scenic beauty could relieve you from the
stress
you are going through at the workplace.
Moreover
, you can spot various wildlife that you would
be interested
to take photos for your Facebook photography page.

However
, I
must
also
mention the challenges faced during camping. Nature’s weather conditions are unpredictable,
so
it is best to
be prepared
for all circumstances.
Also
, you may
come
across bug bites which is quite normal during this journey.

If it is alright with you, I am
pleased
to accompany you on your camping as it has been a long time we met since our graduation and if you have any particular questions regarding the trip, you may speak to me on the phone.

Yours
Truly
,

Max
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
208 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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