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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for this summer. He has asked you your advise

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for this summer. He has asked you your advise LAKK

Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you in good health and prosperity. I am thrilled to know that you want to do camping for this summer holidays. As you have asked my advice for camping as holiday’s option, I will try my best to guide you as per my best knowledge. Camping gives you an opportunity to feel nature very closely. You can do fishing, boating or trekking while on camping. Camping sites usually have very open space, there you can play badminton or football. Certainly, camping brings you peace of mind as you will be away from busy life of metro city. As you are a nature lover and a sports person, I am sure you will enjoy time while doing camping. However, there are few demerits of camping as holiday’s option. First of all, you must check weather predictions for the dates you are planning to go for camping. As camping is not a fun during rainy season. Medical facilities might not be available at camp sites, so you should not forget to bring first-aid box along with you. Insects can be an another irritating reason to spoil your fun time at camp site You should bring insect repellent as well. Luckily, my summer break from office coincide with your holidays’ dates. As you know, camping is my hobby and I cannot miss an golden opportunity to go with you on camping. We can choose to go to nearby camp site or whatever suits you. Looking forward to hearing from you. I am excited to meet and spend my holidays with you. All the best, Vijay

Dear Sam,

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must
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.

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Looking forward to hearing from you. I am excited
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 and spend my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holidays
 with you.

All the best,

Vijay