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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He /she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. 1. Suggest an interesting part of the city to live in 2. Describe the public transport in your city 3. Say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He /she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. 1. Suggest an interesting part of the city to live in 2. Describe the public transport in your city 3. Say how your friend can meet new people there B5nV
Dear Arthur, How have you been? It’s been too long since we were last met. I’m delighted to know that you are coming from India to my city Toronto because of your work. It’s my immense pleasure to guide you about Toronto. It is one of the most promising city of Canada which has the best environment amongst other cities. I urge, you should stay in Downtown, the best scenic part of the city. I know you are fond of heritage, culture and you will love this city due to its history and locality. This is the only part of city where you will find greenery and your favourite street food. The thing is, public transport in Toronto is not much good as compared to most of the cities. Almost, every part of this city is connected by metro but it is not frequent as the bus service. Toronto has the best bus service throughout the day but it is time-consuming. You can opt for the cab service in case of emergency. Luckily, your friendly nature will help you to connect with new people. You are talkative and this quality of yours will definitely grow your circle in the city. I can’t wait to hear from you. Best wishes, Prashant
Dear Arthur,

How have you been? It’s been too long since we were last met. I’m delighted to know that you are coming from India to my city Toronto
because
of your work. It’s my immense pleasure to guide you about Toronto.

It is one of the most promising city of Canada which has the best environment amongst other
cities
. I urge, you should stay in Downtown, the best scenic part of the city. I know you are fond of heritage, culture and you will
love
this city due to its history and locality. This is the
only
part of city where you will find greenery and your
favourite
street food.

The thing is, public transport in Toronto is not much
good
as compared to most of the
cities
. Almost, every part of this city
is connected
by metro
but
it is not frequent as the bus service. Toronto has the best bus service throughout the day
but
it is time-consuming. You can opt for the cab service in case of emergency.

Luckily, your friendly nature will
help
you to connect with new
people
. You are talkative and this quality of yours will definitely grow your circle in the city.

I can’t wait to hear from you.

Best wishes,

Prashant
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He /she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. 1. Suggest an interesting part of the city to live in 2. Describe the public transport in your city 3. Say how your friend can meet new people there

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
209 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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