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There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.

There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. awlpG
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to explain my disappointment with the changing room. There are many weeks that I have complained about the showers to one of the supervisors, however, nothing has changed since my complaints. None of the showers has hot water, and despite the fact that is summertime, it is extremely difficult to deal with this problem, because the water comes out incredibly cold. The last time I complained the supervisor said the heater is not functioning the matter it is supposed to be. For this reason, he has already ordered the piece that is broken, but unfortunately, it is depleted and the provider has no information when he will receive this part. I would like to request a new provider because I am aware that it is not the only one who works with this type of equipment. I could assist you to find a new one and order the part which is not working properly. Should you have any questions, you can contact me via email nayararastelli@gmail. com or call me at 444 925-1234 to will provide all the details. I look forward to a swift resolution to this matter.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to
explain
my disappointment with the changing room. There are
many
weeks that I have complained about the showers to one of the supervisors,
however
, nothing has
changed
since my complaints. None of the showers has hot
water
, and despite the fact
that is
summertime
, it is
extremely
difficult to deal with this problem,
because
the water
comes
out
incredibly
cold
.

The last time I complained the supervisor said the heater is not functioning the matter it
is supposed
to be.
For this reason
, he has already ordered the piece that
is broken
,
but
unfortunately, it
is depleted
and the provider has no information when he will receive this part.

I would like to request a new provider
because
I am aware that it is not the
only
one who works with this type of equipment. I could assist you to find a new one and order the part which is not working
properly
. Should you have any questions, you can contact me via email
nayararastelli@gmail
.
com
or call me at 444 925-1234 to will provide all the
details
.

I look forward to a swift resolution to this matter.
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IELTS letter There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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