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There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter • describe the problems • explain how these problems are affecting the public • suggest what changes could be made

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this to complain about inefficiency of public transportation in Sengkang west area, which is happening from last couple of weeks and is still going on. There are multiple problems with Bus transportation, first of which is frequent bus delays, busses are not arriving or leaving on mentioned time, which is affecting following busses as well. Along with bus delays, sanitisation is another major concern among the common people of the area, as seats and passage are not cleaned and sanitised properly. Due to a number of issues with public transportation, it has affected daily lives of common people in the area, including school going children, who are not able to reach their schools on time, people going to offices have similar concerns, which are affecting their work and mental fitness. It is not just the mental fitness, which is being affected, physical fitness is also at risk because of improper sanitisation of seats, raising health concern among the common public. It would be very helpful if some process is implemented to check the bus delays and to rectify the root cause, plus proper sanitisation of all the vehicles are done on regular basis. Looking forward to see our public transportation in efficient state. Yours Faithfully Ronak Banka

Dear Sir or Madam,

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transportation
 in Sengkang west area, which is happening from last couple of weeks and is still
 going on.

There are multiple problems with Bus You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportshipmentshipping
transportation
, first
 of which is frequent bus delays, busses are not arriving or leaving on mentioned time, which is affecting following busses as well
. Along with bus delays, Possible spelling mistake found.sanitization
sanitisation
 is another major concern among the common This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of the area, as seats and passage are not cleaned and Possible spelling mistake. ‘sanitised’ is British English.sanitized
sanitised
properly
.

Due to a number of issues with public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportshipmentshipping
transportation
, it has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 daily This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 of common This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the area, including school going children, who are not able to reach their schools on time, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 going to offices have similar concerns, which are affecting their work and mental fitness. It is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 the mental fitness, which is being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
, physical fitness is also
 at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of improper Possible spelling mistake found.sanitization
sanitisation
 of seats, raising health concern among the common public.

It would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 helpful if This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 process is implemented
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the bus delays and to rectify the root cause, plus proper Possible spelling mistake found.sanitization
sanitisation
 of all the vehicles are done
 on regular basis.

Looking forward to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 our public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportshipmentshipping
transportation
 in efficient state.

Yours Faithfully


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